JaylinBoykins

Thanks so much for the review and the donation. I will definitely incorporate these changes

I don't know why my reply glitched like this lmao. I will add more punctuations

Thanks so much. My lack of punctuation was out of fear of not creating a consistent flow since it didn%u2019t really have a rhyme scheme but I%u2019ll definitely input more ...

Thanks so much and I definitely agree. Some things can%u2019t be simply categorized

Thanks so much! I will take your suggestions.

Sorry I didn't realize I forgot to finish it. I apologize for the abrupt ending.

A newly improved piece!Thanks for the suggestions.

Thanks for the review! I think I will take your advice!

Hello! Just Jaylin here leaving a quick review of your piece. First, I would like to say that the first two lines were fantastic and drew me in from the ...

Hey! I adored your poem it was fresh and I enjoyed the topic of the poem. The tittle was perfect and the rhyme scheme was lovely. I felt like the ...

Keep up the work!

I enjoyed your poem. Your closer was probably my favorite part of the poem. I enjoyed the flow of your poem and thought it was rather creative to use the ...

Jaylin here just leaving a review. The poem is great but I have just a few critiques. My main critique is the lack of a diverse literary devices (idioms, metaphor, ...