JaylinBoykins

Hello this Jaylin here to leave a quick review (I apologize if anything comes off harsh it is not my intentions). I love this poem. It reflects a truth that ...

Hello it's Jaylin here to leave a quick review of your work (sorry in advance if anything comes off as harsh it is not my intentions.) I honestly adore this ...

Hey it's Jaylin here to leave a quick review. I really enjoyed reading this poem. It was simplistic yet beautiful and relate-able (at least for me). Too often I have ...

Hello it's Jaylin here to leave a quick review. I loved everything about this poem. Honestly something as a young writer I aspire to capture. It perfectly details the scenery ...

Hello it’s Jaylin here to leave a quick review. First I want to say this was beautifully written and as a reader I could picture the details of the comparisons ...

First, I want to say I am sorry for your loss and hope you and your family recovers. Life is definitely precious and it is hard to let go but ...

This was excellent. I usually avoid these kinds of poems due to the cliche messages but your poem kept me captivated. It flowed together so fluently and your vocabulary usage ...

This was a creative concept and it paid off well. I enjoyed reading this and the constant fight you have with your mind and dealing with your emotions. You excellently ...

This poem is actually really good and it has a rather smooth flow with a few bumps. I only have a few critiques for this poem. The starting "Without me" ...

This poem has a beautiful meaning and I am happy you have met someone you are truly in love with. That is one of the best feelings to have especially ...

Hello! Jaylin here to leave a quick review. I see this is your first published poem so congratulations on your first submit and welcome to YWS! Your poem is great ...

Hey just Jaylin here to leave a short review of your piece "Insane Asylum". The literary techniques in this poem are amazing and bring the poem to life. I loved ...

Hello! Just Jaylin here leaving a quick review of your piece. First, I would like to say that the first two lines were fantastic and drew me in from the ...

The poem was pretty good. It speaks to me since I was in this state a few weeks ago. I love the use of rather because it shows confusion. I ...

Hello! Just Jaylin hear to leave a quick review. I loved the poem and how mature it was. It was a perfect symbolization of the brutal ways of life. You ...