Hello! Just Jaylin hear to leave a quick review. I loved the poem and how mature it was. It was a perfect symbolization of the brutal ways of life. You did a awesome job relating this poem to how life has no sensor and shows no mercy. The figurative language in this poem was outstanding also. The third stanza was my favorite of the poem because how realistic it is. The world has a way of building you up then slashing you down again and has no care of the rubble left behind from it. My only complaint with this poem is that you are missing punctuation marks for when you end your statements. I thought you did amazing! Keep up the good work!
Points: 11
Reviews: 24
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