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JayeCShore

JayeCShore

  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: The Flamenco

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! There was just so much excitement and culture that it was hard to not get caught up in it all. Night had fallen, finding ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Second Always Comes Last: Hutcheon [Null]

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! I was always the second to arrive. I always was prompt in attending class early, not because I was fussed, or aiming for a ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Corps of Recovery: Part 10

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! Rudi waited anxiously for Lady Tamara’s response. Her face was twisted into determined rage, eyes blazing with ire. Then, she suddenly closed her eyes ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: An Arrow's Flight - Chapter 1: Rebellion (II of VI)

    Hi, J.C. here for a review, as promised! Well, I definitely liked this more than the first chapter, and I liked that one quite a bit. High Fantasy has always ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Pins and Twine.

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! A/N: this is more rambling and just putting thoughts onto paper which is the reason it isn't very good! Well, I suppose I have ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: Exception to the Expectation

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! This poem was impressively retarded. Which is a good thing. In my house, we use the word "retarded" as a satirical compliment. Trust me, ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I Knew Somehow It Was The Last Time

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! This poem is a cliche in every sense of the word, except for the words themselves. Not a bad thing, though, but romantic poems ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Health Re: A Tribute to the Semicolon Project

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! I just finished reviewing another of your poems, and when I began to read this I was a bit worried that it would turn ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Titleless (Cutting Poem) *Trigger Warning*

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! Okay, I'm going to come right out and say this, but I don't like poems like this. For multiple reasons. 1) Depression is such ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Watching Bats

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! This poem is so cool in so many ways, and not just because it reminds me of Batman :P Propped messily against the chalky ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: The Ectoplasm in My Fridge

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! In my fridge there is a goo, A sort of creamy, oozing stew. It sits and congeals, Next to the meals, That later I ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Dear Lord (It's Worth It To Me)

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! Well, I am a very spiritual person, so I was a bit worried when I started to read that this would be all about ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Seven Sins In My Home

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! I must say, this was very beautiful in a sort of disturbing way. Not disturbing as in blood and guts, but in the sense ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Sipping Orange Juice

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! First off, I must say that I have absolutely no idea what the point of this poem is. I don't mean that in a ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: ​​​Second Always Comes Last Preveiw: Sir

    Hi, J.C. here for a review! Okay, I'm pretty dang positive that I've read this before, which would make sense, but that was when I was AE, so, a long ...

    Jun 21, 2014


Keep your face always toward the sunshine - and the shadows will fall beyond you.
— Walt Whitman