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Re: The Flamenco
Hi, J.C. here for a review! There was just so much excitement and culture that it was hard to not get caught up in it all. Night had fallen, finding ...
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Re: Second Always Comes Last: Hutcheon [Null]
Hi, J.C. here for a review! I was always the second to arrive. I always was prompt in attending class early, not because I was fussed, or aiming for a ...
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Re: Corps of Recovery: Part 10
Hi, J.C. here for a review! Rudi waited anxiously for Lady Tamara’s response. Her face was twisted into determined rage, eyes blazing with ire. Then, she suddenly closed her eyes ...
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Re: An Arrow's Flight - Chapter 1: Rebellion (II of VI)
Hi, J.C. here for a review, as promised! Well, I definitely liked this more than the first chapter, and I liked that one quite a bit. High Fantasy has always ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Pins and Twine.
Hi, J.C. here for a review! A/N: this is more rambling and just putting thoughts onto paper which is the reason it isn't very good! Well, I suppose I have ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Exception to the Expectation
Hi, J.C. here for a review! This poem was impressively retarded. Which is a good thing. In my house, we use the word "retarded" as a satirical compliment. Trust me, ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: I Knew Somehow It Was The Last Time
Hi, J.C. here for a review! This poem is a cliche in every sense of the word, except for the words themselves. Not a bad thing, though, but romantic poems ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: A Tribute to the Semicolon Project
Hi, J.C. here for a review! I just finished reviewing another of your poems, and when I began to read this I was a bit worried that it would turn ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Titleless (Cutting Poem) *Trigger Warning*
Hi, J.C. here for a review! Okay, I'm going to come right out and say this, but I don't like poems like this. For multiple reasons. 1) Depression is such ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Watching Bats
Hi, J.C. here for a review! This poem is so cool in so many ways, and not just because it reminds me of Batman :P Propped messily against the chalky ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: The Ectoplasm in My Fridge
Hi, J.C. here for a review! In my fridge there is a goo, A sort of creamy, oozing stew. It sits and congeals, Next to the meals, That later I ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Dear Lord (It's Worth It To Me)
Hi, J.C. here for a review! Well, I am a very spiritual person, so I was a bit worried when I started to read that this would be all about ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Seven Sins In My Home
Hi, J.C. here for a review! I must say, this was very beautiful in a sort of disturbing way. Not disturbing as in blood and guts, but in the sense ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Sipping Orange Juice
Hi, J.C. here for a review! First off, I must say that I have absolutely no idea what the point of this poem is. I don't mean that in a ...
Jun 29, 2014 -
Re: Second Always Comes Last Preveiw: Sir
Hi, J.C. here for a review! Okay, I'm pretty dang positive that I've read this before, which would make sense, but that was when I was AE, so, a long ...
Jun 21, 2014
