Just wow! The poem is about a serious and very sad topic but this poem wasn't depressing. It made me smile, it was like a ray of hope or the light at the end of the tunnel and its beautiful.
A few suggestions.
in the fourth verse I would not repeat hope twice. Once is fine but twice just feels like a bit to much if you know what I mean.
Also not many people know what the semi colon project is. Maybe instead of saying wear it on my wrist you could say draw? Or bring up that the topic is in fact about self harm by making a subtle reference to scars.
Overall I loved the poem. I love the idea of the semi colon project and this poem fits it so perfectly, keep up the good work!
Points: 318
Reviews: 5
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