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  • Poetry » General, General Re: For All It Can Be

    I thought this was about broken or not achieved dreams... But now I doubt. I didn't really get it ^_^ But it reminded my of my mistakes. We make so ...

    Mon Oct 15, 2012 8:35 pm
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Paradise

    Dude, I didn't really get the plot, I mean what were you saying, I've never went to hawii :s, But I did had one beautiful girl and man... this writing ...

    Mon Oct 15, 2012 8:31 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Joy

    You got the point. Most writers I see nowadays are complaining and whining about life. But living is a great thing! Life is the greatest thing! (well, not for hungry ...

    Mon Oct 15, 2012 8:23 pm
  • Poetry » Horror, Lyrical Re: Fire

    I liked rhymes. It's kind of unique. The whole verse brings lots of energy. And this energy flow doesn't go down, it keeps this... thrust. Something is really bothering you ...

    Mon Oct 15, 2012 7:49 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Tribeless

    Oh, dear Anniee I understand the source of you energy that flows through this rhymes. It gets complicated sometimes, but this shows us and teaches the meaning of life - ...

    Sun Oct 14, 2012 8:39 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Literature Re: SWAT

    I want to say thank you for anyone for reading my novel. I'm really appreciated. The whole grammar and bullet things are because I copied from word document - and ...

    Sun Oct 14, 2012 11:27 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Woman's World...

    ah.. Feminism. You scare me. you scare me a little. I enjoyed reading, but you scare me. I don't think this is unacceptable or so, but it has some kind ...

    Sat Oct 13, 2012 10:37 pm
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: Nothing Never Happened

    Really emotional. I like it. I understand you too. But in my case, I had "the doll", but it didn't matter somehow... We can take the understanding of "doll'' to ...

    Sat Oct 13, 2012 5:34 pm
  • Short Story » Romantic, Fanfiction Re: In Love On a Tour Bus

    I like it. All tough it may seem silly but on the other hand, I really like how one express herself. This is main thing in writing. Being sincere isn't ...

    Sat Oct 13, 2012 4:02 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Prologue

    The story is interesting. It expresses humans from other side really well. It would be good if we conquered our demons and lived in harmony with "dragons". keep up the ...

    Sat Oct 13, 2012 3:49 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Artemis Trials

    Amazing! Fascinating! Intriguing! :)) I can't even find a words to express how I felt reading this. As I told you, the world you created is spectacular! I felt the ...

    Sat Oct 13, 2012 2:57 pm
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: I wish he knew/I wish she knew

    What we encounter in this novel is normal, everyday thing for most of teenagers. It's too bad that it hurts. As you grow up (and from 15 to 20 this ...

    Sat Oct 13, 2012 2:44 pm
  • Other » General, Realistic Re: To My Future Daughter

    Nice. I really enjoyed reading this. Too bad children never really listen to parents though. But this work represents you as a really good person. They say: Everybody loves/will love ...

    Sat Oct 13, 2012 2:36 pm


In a dream you are never eighty.
— Anne Sexton