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Re: For All It Can Be
I thought this was about broken or not achieved dreams... But now I doubt. I didn't really get it ^_^ But it reminded my of my mistakes. We make so ...
Oct 15, 2012 -
Re: Paradise
Dude, I didn't really get the plot, I mean what were you saying, I've never went to hawii :s, But I did had one beautiful girl and man... this writing ...
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Re: Joy
You got the point. Most writers I see nowadays are complaining and whining about life. But living is a great thing! Life is the greatest thing! (well, not for hungry ...
Oct 15, 2012 -
Re: Fire
I liked rhymes. It's kind of unique. The whole verse brings lots of energy. And this energy flow doesn't go down, it keeps this... thrust. Something is really bothering you ...
Oct 15, 2012 -
Re: Tribeless
Oh, dear Anniee I understand the source of you energy that flows through this rhymes. It gets complicated sometimes, but this shows us and teaches the meaning of life - ...
Oct 14, 2012 -
Re: SWAT
I want to say thank you for anyone for reading my novel. I'm really appreciated. The whole grammar and bullet things are because I copied from word document - and ...
Oct 14, 2012 -
Re: Woman's World...
ah.. Feminism. You scare me. you scare me a little. I enjoyed reading, but you scare me. I don't think this is unacceptable or so, but it has some kind ...
Oct 13, 2012 -
Re: Nothing Never Happened
Really emotional. I like it. I understand you too. But in my case, I had "the doll", but it didn't matter somehow... We can take the understanding of "doll'' to ...
Oct 13, 2012 -
Re: In Love On a Tour Bus
I like it. All tough it may seem silly but on the other hand, I really like how one express herself. This is main thing in writing. Being sincere isn't ...
Oct 13, 2012 -
Re: Prologue
The story is interesting. It expresses humans from other side really well. It would be good if we conquered our demons and lived in harmony with "dragons". keep up the ...
Oct 13, 2012 -
Re: The Artemis Trials
Amazing! Fascinating! Intriguing! :)) I can't even find a words to express how I felt reading this. As I told you, the world you created is spectacular! I felt the ...
Oct 13, 2012 -
Re: I wish he knew/I wish she knew
What we encounter in this novel is normal, everyday thing for most of teenagers. It's too bad that it hurts. As you grow up (and from 15 to 20 this ...
Oct 13, 2012 -
Re: To My Future Daughter
Nice. I really enjoyed reading this. Too bad children never really listen to parents though. But this work represents you as a really good person. They say: Everybody loves/will love ...
Oct 13, 2012
