JamesPeterson

A short story's purpose (as you most likely well know and have shown) is to tell a compelling and memorable story in a *short* amount of time. In just over ...

Heyo, Liminality! I know I'm late to the party, but I found your piece here and liked it quite a bit, so I thought I'd give it a go! :D ...

Hey imahni, i really enjoyed your short here :D I haven't done reviews in a while, so of course feel free to pick and choose the helpful advice amongst the ...

Heyo! I'm here to give a short review on your awesome short story here. To start off, I like how you start it. As with most short stories, you should ...

Hello, I'm here to give a review the best I can. I am not good with History, so Ill let kattee help you there :P Ill start by saying that ...

Hello, short review from a flaming book! :D I just popped by, having never read or reviewed any of your work before (probably because your new XD). First, I love ...

I, an Eldritch Tome, now pass my knowledge to you. Straight off the bat, I noticed that you put "I arose..." then the sentence after "I sit up" I think ...

A floating tome here to give you a review! :D First thing I noticed was that it was a huge wall of text. So as The_Closet_Writer said, you should probably ...

Hi! An Eldritch Tome here to give you a short review. To begin, I liked how you did your rhyming. It was consistent and all flowed nicely. Second, I think ...

Heyo, a Floating Eldritch Tome here with a review. Straight off the bat, you can tell you are describing everything nicely. While you describe a lot, however, you need to ...

An Eldritch Tome here for a little review. First of all, I liked that you wrote a poem about how you write. I thought it was very neat. Going with ...

Hello, and salutations. I'm here for a short review. First of all, I like your alliteration. The rhyming and sounds are fit together and roll off the tongue. I know ...

Salutations, my good fellow. I am here for a little review. First of all, wow. Just wow. I would just like to say that I loved this poem. Your use ...

Heyo! A flaming, floating book here to give a review. First thing I noticed (and you did too) was that it was kind of hard to read. The connected sentences ...

I like your poem, its awesome! I like your use of some words and the vision you plant in people's minds. It's great. I recommend you add punctuation. Commas in ...