Jadefox

Hello fellow Dragon, First poem I've reviewed today and what a reward it's been! I can hardly believe that this poem only has one review because it is a true ...

Hey there, What a lovely start to a novel, if that is what you hope to write. For a first chapter, I found this caught my attention very quickly. The ...

Hello there, You are my second review for the day! Honestly, this story made me smile, and not many stories do. It was written quite sweetly and simply, something I ...

Hello Fellow Dragon, So this is my first review for Review Day, and not only that, my first ever review day! I began your story and it at first started ...

Hey there! I can tell this story was a very intense writing session. You portrayed the solitude and desperation through the description very well. There were just a few grammatical ...

Hey there! When I began reading this story, I thought it was going to be somewhat like a horror story or something like that. I was completely wrong. I had ...

Hey there! First off congrats on your first story! It's a good start and I know you're probably anxious to get some reviews. They storyline was pretty good, and you ...

Oh my goodness. Is all I can say at the moment. In. Broken. Sentences. Ahem. You've filled this story to the brink with passion. I don't believe it could've come ...

Hey, I was reading this in bio so I was only looking at the plot cause class is almost out. The plot catches you right away and you want to ...

Hey there! This was really exciting, but it felt like it was only a glimpse of what it could be. I feel, this could be the beginning of something bigger, ...

Hey there! I really liked this, but I am not really sure what to call it. I mean, you listed it as a short story but it read more like ...

Hello, Okay, I admit, now I feel more oriented as a reader now that I read Chapter Two. Thanks for getting me to read the second chapter. I really enjoy ...

Okay, finally, I've gotten around to reading this chapter! The unforgiving, determined mood that you've seemed to Nova fits the story perfectly. You haven't lost the tempo of the story ...

Hi! This story was really, really sweet. Since I am about to go to bed in a moment, it was probably good to read something so heart-warming. Okay, okay...now I ...

Oh, now I get the comparison between the raccoons and Lindsey and Brittney. That was a really smart foreshadowing idea, something that I feel am never able to do in ...