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Re: Adieu
Hello again, phoenix! After reading Round and Round, I'm noticing the style of music you write. It's hard to grasp that since I can't ever here the music with the ...
May 11, 2012 -
Re: Round and Round
Hi, phoenix! After I read this, I wanted more. :) Will you be adding to this? I feel it could benefit from some more behind it! Maybe a story or ...
May 11, 2012 -
Re: wasted
Hey, LRA! You have some awesome pictures and imagery in here. xD It certainly gives the listener a feel for what the speaker is feeling right now. You have some ...
May 11, 2012 -
Re: DELETED
Hi, Jackle! This is cool, and it's certainly an interesting perspective to take on. I've never been personally in that situation, so feel free to ignore any suggestions regarding character ...
May 11, 2012 -
Re: you and me vs. us
Hi, Anyale! This is very cute in a sad way. It brings alive the story within very well, and that's definitely a plus side to the song. There's always a ...
May 11, 2012 -
Re: Syria Sleeps
This is beautiful. I understood what this song was about when I sat and thought about Syria and what that entailed. (I'm a bit slow. xD) But yeah. This was ...
May 11, 2012 -
Re: Screaming Abuse
*sneaks in* I'm supposed to be studying, but I saw this linked in the People tabby thing, and I read it, and now I'm going to comment on it 'cause ...
May 10, 2012 -
Re: Void absence
MIKSTER. I just read it. And I love it. but all I feel is empty electricity, the current flowing away from life. What's empty electricity feel like? D: I'm not ...
Jan 31, 2012 -
Re: Rebellion Against The Pigs
Hey, AJ! I apologize for being late to the party here, but I managed to leave something anyway! :D It's definitely a forceful song, but that's really not the issue ...
Jan 31, 2012 -
Re: I don't know how to fly...
SparkleDoubt! It's a cute song! I think your imagery is fabulous, actually. You set up an entirely different world in the sky in just a few lines. It's really well-done, ...
Jan 13, 2012 -
Re: Rescue Me (Rated 18+)
Hiya, Ally! I'm back! :D Before I begin, I thought I'd mention that I went ahead and put in a rating (found in parentheses in your title). The F-bomb was ...
Jan 13, 2012 -
Re: His Princess
Dasia! JASKLDF;ASDF This is absolutely ADORABLE. I LOVED this so much. Bravobravobravo! The imagery was beautiful, and the story was told so WONDERFULLY. One of your best works, I think! ...
Jan 13, 2012 -
Re: Drowning in The Rain (Sherlys song)
Hi, Dasia! Let me know if you're ever sick of seeing me! But I love seeing you post more songs. I really, really do! I enjoy reading them! Some need ...
Jan 13, 2012 -
Re: After the Storm
Crimsona! Hi! I'm not sure I ever read any of your work before, so this will be fun. Well, actually. I'll be honest. I read this probably a bazillion times. ...
Jan 13, 2012 -
Re: Dear Nicki
Hi, AJ! I saw your piece here and thought I'd stop by! I found this to be rather repetitive, but ignoring that and looking at what you actually have in ...
Jan 13, 2012
