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Re: Coffins
Bahahahaha. She reminds me of Sherlock Holmes. I adore her. I'm sad there's not more. I love Sherlock Holmes. I've read several novels, watched TV shows and movies and all ...
Mar 26, 2019 -
Re: The black Ravens
I love where this is going! Tell me there's more?! You have a very good grasp on imagery and description. I can tell you know precisely how to use it. ...
Mar 26, 2019 -
Re: Owls Don't Cry 2/2
GOOSEBUMPS. It's so sad, such a bittersweet ending. I'm still kind of just swimming in feels right now. I'm happy that she found Richard, who is incredibly understanding and supportive. ...
Mar 24, 2019 -
Re: Owls Don't Cry 1/2
Hey, friend! It makes me happy to see you actively writing still! It truly does, and I'm already proud of you. I really enjoyed this piece, and I absolutely plan ...
Mar 24, 2019 -
Re: Triplets
Hello! I really loved the air of mystery you have in this piece. It left me very curious and reading into all the details that was provided to me. The ...
Mar 24, 2019 -
Re: Locked Up Inside
Hey, SparkleDoubt! I'm so sorry this is late and things. I'm participating in Camp NaNo, so I was dedicating a lot of free time to writing the monster. But today, ...
Aug 17, 2012 -
Re: The Fall of YWS: Chapter One
Hi, Griff! I'm totes here now. Last night got away from me, so it's a little later than expected! So like I said before, I really enjoyed reading this. It ...
Jul 24, 2012 -
Re: Please Come See Me
Hey, AJ! I actually liked this piece. It was cool! And it was a little different than the work you usually write, so it's refreshing. :) VERSE ONE (2/2): Picked ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: A Certain Devotion.
Hi, AJ! Back again! :D I like how you started the song. I actually really liked that first stanza. You have a good habit of starting songs out well! xD ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: deleted
Hi, AJ! Teehee, you're right. It's definitely a simple song. I like how you effectively brought in some social issues from an average Joe's angle. That perspective is always easy ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: Birdlike
Hi, Spencer! This was neat. I like what you did with the metaphor of the bird. You actually had good moments in which you used bird-like vocabulary to describe things. ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: Meet Yourself Coming
Hi, Cadi! Here as promised. :D (And also, review #1! *flail*) I hope I can be any sort of help or at least eye-opening 'cause, like, this was awesome. It ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: La Curandera's Instructions: Act 2
Hi, Murmurations! I'm back on this lovely Review Day! :D Yup! This is definitely the second installment. xD And it's kinda weird, but I like it in that weird way. ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: Reflections: Act 1
Hi, Murmurations! I'm here to review on this lovely Review Day! :D This was an interesting piece. I can't say I was roped into it, but it was very intriguing ...
Jun 25, 2012 -
Re: Something, I don't have a title. (:
Hi, Nike! xD Well, I guess I can tell you wrote this at 1am, then! It's certainly not the best piece, but it definitely got me thinking. It encourages thoughts ...
Jun 25, 2012
