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  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Coffins

    Bahahahaha. She reminds me of Sherlock Holmes. I adore her. I'm sad there's not more. I love Sherlock Holmes. I've read several novels, watched TV shows and movies and all ...

    Mar 26, 2019
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The black Ravens

    I love where this is going! Tell me there's more?! You have a very good grasp on imagery and description. I can tell you know precisely how to use it. ...

    Mar 26, 2019
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Owls Don't Cry 2/2

    GOOSEBUMPS. It's so sad, such a bittersweet ending. I'm still kind of just swimming in feels right now. I'm happy that she found Richard, who is incredibly understanding and supportive. ...

    Mar 24, 2019
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: Owls Don't Cry 1/2

    Hey, friend! It makes me happy to see you actively writing still! It truly does, and I'm already proud of you. I really enjoyed this piece, and I absolutely plan ...

    Mar 24, 2019
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Triplets

    Hello! I really loved the air of mystery you have in this piece. It left me very curious and reading into all the details that was provided to me. The ...

    Mar 24, 2019
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Locked Up Inside

    Hey, SparkleDoubt! I'm so sorry this is late and things. I'm participating in Camp NaNo, so I was dedicating a lot of free time to writing the monster. But today, ...

    Aug 17, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: The Fall of YWS: Chapter One

    Hi, Griff! I'm totes here now. Last night got away from me, so it's a little later than expected! So like I said before, I really enjoyed reading this. It ...

    Jul 24, 2012
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Please Come See Me

    Hey, AJ! I actually liked this piece. It was cool! And it was a little different than the work you usually write, so it's refreshing. :) VERSE ONE (2/2): Picked ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Narrative Re: A Certain Devotion.

    Hi, AJ! Back again! :D I like how you started the song. I actually really liked that first stanza. You have a good habit of starting songs out well! xD ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: deleted

    Hi, AJ! Teehee, you're right. It's definitely a simple song. I like how you effectively brought in some social issues from an average Joe's angle. That perspective is always easy ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Other » General, Literature Re: Birdlike

    Hi, Spencer! This was neat. I like what you did with the metaphor of the bird. You actually had good moments in which you used bird-like vocabulary to describe things. ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Meet Yourself Coming

    Hi, Cadi! Here as promised. :D (And also, review #1! *flail*) I hope I can be any sort of help or at least eye-opening 'cause, like, this was awesome. It ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Other » Mystery / Suspense, Spiritual Re: La Curandera's Instructions: Act 2

    Hi, Murmurations! I'm back on this lovely Review Day! :D Yup! This is definitely the second installment. xD And it's kinda weird, but I like it in that weird way. ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Other » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: Reflections: Act 1

    Hi, Murmurations! I'm here to review on this lovely Review Day! :D This was an interesting piece. I can't say I was roped into it, but it was very intriguing ...

    Jun 25, 2012
  • Other » General, Teen Fiction Re: Something, I don't have a title. (:

    Hi, Nike! xD Well, I guess I can tell you wrote this at 1am, then! It's certainly not the best piece, but it definitely got me thinking. It encourages thoughts ...

    Jun 25, 2012


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