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Paris is officially my favorite character ever. Like... ever. I want more Paris in my life. I can babble on through this entire review about how much I want a ...

SO INTRIGUED. To drop a few of my impressions, I'm going to start with I'M SUPER INTRIGUED SO FAR. There isn't enough time in my day, really. So aggravatingly intrigued. ...

HELLO! Told you I'd get to this. Just had to get NaPo out of my hair. :D And I am SUPER happy that I started reading this. I'm already enjoying ...

Hello! There's a very clear emotion of desperation and worry in this piece. You conveyed that extremely well with how short the phrases are, how quickly the thoughts are streamed ...

Hello! You have such a strong piece here. It's such a good theme, and you express that uncertainty of tomorrow so well while maintaining a voice of courage facing the ...

Hello! This is such a bittersweet poem. I love how the speaker references particular moments in their past history with this other person, and you did such a good job ...

Hello! I like what you have here, expressing ways to show love to someone who really deserves better treatment. It's like a third person pining away for someone who is ...

Hey, Liberty! What an eerie piece you have here. Such an intense story told in only a few lines. Someone's grandpa being shot at midday, like that is scary stuff. ...

Hello! I really love what you have here. There are so many good ideas, and it was pieces of a puzzle finally set together all at once in the last ...

Hello, Alex! I enjoyed your theme here. It's a unique spin on a classic subject, and you had some excellent word choice to back it up. I love its simplicity, ...

Hiya! Oooooh girl, I really like this one. The imagery is so well done, the narrative is really just breath-taking to read. You do a good job of holding my ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS. :D I really like how you compared the diversity of women with the diversity of flowers. You had some excellent word choice here that really helped ...

Hello! I really like your theme here, and I like how you compare the multiple perspectives of a personality and compare it to that of a masquerade party. You really ...

Oooh yay, I loved this one! I adored your use of colors in this one. The imagery it produces is just so powerful to me. Better yet, you use food ...

Hello! This is such a lovely poem, and it has such a strong beginning. The intro stanza is so beautiful with such powerful imagery. It was beautifully constructed. The entire ...