Wow, I really love this poem. It has a thythm that make me want to dig it, but what of this poem that apeals most to me must be that I really think i see what you mean - or at least hope so. Sometimes it seems like you are a diffrient person every day, you change for everyone. I don't think I have ever read a poem or short story that has portrayed this as good as this poem. It made me think about make up, it has always seend like a snail kind of a mask to me. I especially like the end sentence.
Don't ever stop writing!
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