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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 2.1)

    UH. UH. ALANNA? WHY ALANNA? Because she's young or is sHE SPECIAL?? WHY ALANNA? Okay, FIRST OF ALL. Ember is adorable and I love her already. She is spunky, I ...

    Oct 16, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 2.1

    Good morning!! Poor Buck! I really like that we get this new side of Buck now. His world seemed to upturn itself on him so suddenly, and he had such ...

    Oct 15, 2019
  • Other » General, General Re: [DELETED]​

    HELLO! I saw your wallpost and had to come read this for some Unlucky 13 goodies!! And let me tell you, that cliffhanger is SO MEAN. I actually really liked ...

    Oct 14, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: I'm Going Back to Sleep Now.

    Teehee! What a fun little diddy that is completely and utterly relatable in every way. In fact, it's how I hop on as often as I do. I just maintain ...

    Oct 13, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 1.2)

    “I’ll take the floor,” Mishal murmured to her as he passed by. She opened her mouth to protest but then shut it. He’d never budge anyway. So I know he ...

    Oct 12, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Assignment: Rebirth 1.3

    HELLO TUCKSTER!! I love drama. Drama is so much fun to write and it is so much fun to read. You never really know the outcome of a discussion like ...

    Oct 11, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Ice & Magic - Chapter One

    Hi, Scar!! This is SO intriguing. I can tell you have such a detailed world already for your story. There's so much geography, politics, even culture! I'm really just excited ...

    Oct 10, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Assignment: Rebirth 1.2

    Okay, I am SO excited. There's a coder here. I love computer nerds and master hackers and crazy coders and I' m just SO EXCITED THIS IS A THING ?? ...

    Oct 9, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 1.3

    She said, "You haven't asked me why I wish to marry the Prince." Buck shrugged. "Everybody else does." "Exactly.” Pires’s eyes weren’t blinking. “When have I ever wanted to do ...

    Oct 8, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: She's Not A Thing

    Good morning! This definitely gave me goosebumps by the finish. I really like where this poem went, how dark it got. It really fits the theme you're projecting here and ...

    Oct 7, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, Romantic Re: Unnamed Daydream

    I absolutely loved the language used here. Your word choice was really strong and projected your theme incredibly well. I hope that I captured the correct theme from this 'cause ...

    Oct 6, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Nothing but a country song

    Hello!! I have to IMMEDIATELY say how much I love the rhythm of this piece. It flows so well, and your phrases are so well-metered. It makes it very easy ...

    Oct 5, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Revolution

    Hi, Tuckster! I really love how this tells a story and paints a very real picture of the grungy city. You only focus on the graffiti artists, and you smoothly ...

    Oct 4, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: “you’re my world.”

    Hiii! I wish I could say I'm going to have a helpful review, but I really enjoyed this piece. I adore the imagery here, the word choice used to depict ...

    Oct 3, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 1.2

    I love Buck so much. He's just so colorful and eccentric, and the clever narration suits him so well. And his pet spidetta was adorable for a spider-like pet that ...

    Oct 2, 2019


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