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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 12.1

    I myself struggle with transition scenes/chapters, so I know the feel you are feeling right now! But I can say, I think you at least accomplished what it's meant to ...

    Apr 30, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Queerier Service: 1.2

    oh my gosh it's the friendly neighborhood spider!! I FEEL LIKE I WAS TRAINED FOR THIS MOMENT. I just adore your Dracula character. The part where the spider crawled onto ...

    Apr 29, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 25)

    Ohhhhhhh I forgot about the letter Ember got from her parents! OMG DUDE. That means Rowan knows the truth, doesn't it. o____o And what a dangerous time for Ember to ...

    Apr 28, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 24)

    Yeeeeeeeeeeees Mishal is ON to her! I'm so pleased that they're picking up on the strange behavior. Actually, I REALLY loved Mishal comparing this to the heroic adventures he's read ...

    Apr 28, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 23.2)

    noooooooooo I feel like Cassius was kind of forgotten. Actually, maybe I misread it, but I feel like Ember forgot that she was tied to Cassius as well? I think ...

    Apr 27, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 23.1)

    AHHH I AM SO PLEASED WE JUMP INTO ROWAN'S POV omg this is wonderful. I don't really have much TO add since it's mostly just them following the stranger, but ...

    Apr 27, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 22.2)

    NOOOOOOOOOO he is a bad guy and i don't like him ):< I'm really happy that Ember heard Artemesa's cries and showed up 'cause I'd have been super concerned. It ...

    Apr 27, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Children with Stars in their Veins (Chapter 22.1)

    HELLO I HAVE MISSED YOU AND YOUR CHILDREN AND I JUST can I just say that I love the ending sentence and how Cassius internally ranks Mishal's strength as on ...

    Apr 27, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 11.3

    There is SO MUCH I LOVE ABOUT THIS. I hope I remember to say all the things 'cause I am SO EXCITED AHHHHHH. For one, I love that Buck's personality ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 11.3

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    There is SO MUCH I LOVE ABOUT THIS. I hope I remember to say all the things 'cause I am SO EXCITED AHHHHHH. For one, I love that Buck's personality ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 11.2

    Hahahaha that opening paragraph was brilliant. NO ERSON, YOU DO NOT MISS RADDIG. You just miss being properly loved. //sob omg so many emotions here. I'm happy that I got ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 11.1

    I am so pleased to see that Buck told Myal at least. There was some hesitation, but he did eventually tell her. And that pleases me 'cause he cares about ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Fool's Bucket - Ch. 10.3

    DUUUUUDE Also hello, I am back and hoping to catch up this week and oh my god I picked an awful time to take a break because DUDE DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUDE *SCREECH* ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Frozen Past - Chapter Five

    I am so saddened that Emerald and Shiraku are just going to be left behind. :( I really hope they have a little more purpose than that, considering the trouble ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: The Quest for Fire - Frozen Past - Chapter Four

    I AM BACK SO SOON! I, for one, am SO glad it was just a dream. And I think it was a good sign that it felt so far-fetched (but ...

    Apr 26, 2020


The bigger the issue, the smaller you write. Remember that. You don’t write about the horrors of war. No. You write about a kid’s burnt socks lying on the road. You pick the smallest manageable part of the big thing, and you work off the resonance.
— Richard Price