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  • What Are Pets For?

    What Are Pets For? A soft pink glow slowly began to light the dark room, illuminating the furniture; a couch, bookcase, and piano. The bookshelf was overflowing with books of ...

    4 min read
  • Cinnamon and Pine Needles

    Cinnamon And Pine Needles My breathing quickens, and I kick my legs, causing my warm quilt to fall to the floor. My eyes open suddenly, rescuing me from my restless ...

    4 min read
  • Hunter Garrett

    Prologue Hunter Garrett. Even now, four years after his death, my body shudders at the thought of him. I don’t do so in fear, however, like most people. I’m not ...

    1 min read
  • Hunter Garrett

    The prologue is here: Hunter Garrett The warm rays from the sun radiated onto my face as I leaned against the oak tree, the rough bark rubbing against my back. ...

    5 min read
  • Storms

    This is a Greek myth I wrote for school, although you don't really need to know that much about the Greek gods to understand it. And as always, any title ...

    7 min read
  • Reasons To Kill

    I'd love any feedback on this possible, but I do have three things I was really unsure of. 1. The first two sentences. 2. The fact that it is present ...

    5 min read
  • Reasons to Kill

    Reasons to Kill "Sit. I’ll be finished in a moment.” I cringe when I hear her voice; it has hardened so much in the years since I last heard it. ...

    6 min read
  • In An Instant

    This no longer needs to be reviewed - I won't touch it. But I won't say no to praise, general comments that will help me with future essays, or if ...

    11 min read
  • Reality

    This is part of a collection of 100 short stories, some more like rambles. It is for a challenge on LJ that I never officially entered, since I don’t have ...

    1 min read
  • For Matty [Edited 3/21/08]

    This is part of a collection of 100 short stories, some more like rambles. It is for a challenge on LJ that I never officially entered, since I don’t have ...

    1 min read
  • All Eyes On Us [Edited on 3/18/08]

    This is part of a collection of 100 short stories, some more like rambles. It is for a challenge on LJ that I never officially entered, since I don’t have ...

    1 min read
  • Fantasizing

    This is part of a collection of 100 short stories, some more like rambles. It is for a challenge on LJ that I never officially entered, since I don’t have ...

    1 min read
  • To Write In Greek

    This is part of a collection of 100 short stories, some more like rambles. It is for a challenge on LJ that I never officially entered, since I don’t have ...

    1 min read
  • Promises Not Kept (Part One of Three)

    Here's the revised version of He's Just Human, with a new title. Currently being edited.

    1 min read
  • Promises Not Kept (Part Two of Three)

    Here's the revised version of He's Just Human, with a new title. Currently being edited.

    1 min read
  • Promises Not Kept (Part Three of Three)

    Here's the revised version of He's Just Human, with a new title. There is one swear (mild) in this part. Currently being edited.

    1 min read
  • Repercussions (Part One of Two)

    If this is not rated correctly, please let me know. I couldn't decide if it should be 'R.' I don't use the f bomb, but I do use sh*t a ...

    1 min read
  • Repercussions (Part Two of Two)

    If this is not rated correctly, please let me know. I couldn't decide if it should be 'R.' I don't use the f bomb, but I do use sh*t a ...

    1 min read
  • Rainbows and Roses

    This piece is kind of rough still - I had to finish it up to submit it in the OneWord contest. (I got an extension, 'cause Ging is awesome.) It's ...

    1 min read
  • Smiling's A Good Start

    Edited 6/30/08 For Cal's romance contest. Smiling's A Good Start 040: Lake Amber stares straight out at the lake in front of her. The water is still, a faded green ...

    10 min read
  • Out of Focus [Edited 8/29/08]

    This has been edited. I mainly used Icaruss's critique, and I ended up taking out the girl's death scene. So, two questions for all of you: 1) I want the ...

    8 min read
  • Ash In The Box

    All right, so my aunt entered us in this contest a while ago, wanting to see how different our responses to the same prompt is. I have 24 hours to ...

    6 min read
  • Rooftop Conversations

    This is for clograbby's Lost In The Atmosphere contest. The picture I used follows. This has been edited completely. Any more comments? Rooftop Conversations "Hey," Colin whispers behind her, his ...

    13 min read
  • A Black and White Photo

    For KailaMarie's Perspective contest. Well, this one's a little... strange. You know how everyone seems to be doing fancy writing things on YWS lately? Well, they are. xD So when ...

    1 min read
  • All There Is [Edited 8/30/08]

    Note: Many of you will find this disturbing as pretty much the entire story is about self injurers. Also, about the cigarette - the guy with it is just smoking, ...

    11 min read


I hope everyone's safe and sound and has some potatoes in the pantry.
— Arcticus