Hey Jen !!
Another excellent piece of writing ! *is proud of you*
I've done the review in attachment form as a habit, and because I'm too lazy to do the corrections with the whole quote thing, because it never seems to work with me haha so you'll get attachments, always.
God, I'm such a noob, I can't link, I can't quote ... *laughs at self*
On to my review!! It was very well-written, and again you really drew me into the story. Some minor things you could work on, otherwise perfect.
See attachment for more!
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