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Re: What Makes You Feel Orange
Hi Snowfall, ItsCharley here to give you a review! XD This was so good, I doubt I'll have any compaints ^.^ I love how he writes that to his teacher ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Acrostic Poetry
Hello there Aley! ItsCharley here to give you a review! I do like this but I have a few things that bother me a bit: 1. Acrostic poems usually have ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The Night
I have to admit, this was very well done. If I was your english teacher, I'd be so proud, I'd show your stuff to everyone and be like "I taught ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The Diary of a Cat Fanatic- Chapter 1
Hello its Charley here to give you a review! :) This is the most awkwardest, funniest, silliest and greatest thing I have ever seen in my life! I probably won't ...
Aug 20, 2013 -
Re: The Pirate
Hi there Sir Benjamin! It's Charley here to review your poem! I really like it I must say, I'd love to know where you got the idea from? :D I ...
Aug 20, 2013 -
Re: Shoe Shopping
Hello Charley here to review your poem! I have to agree with @runawaylove your punctuation needs work, you need to add commas so it looks much more neater. It also ...
Aug 20, 2013 -
Re: Habibiti
HELLO! Its Charley here to give you a review! :) This is great, I love how you used another language! 'Habibiti' sounds so cool. You did an amazing job at ...
Aug 19, 2013 -
Re: Life Goes On.
This is beautiful (though depressing), it's so full of emotion, I l o v e it! You seem to make it kind of rhyme in there which I love about ...
Aug 19, 2013 -
Re: Don't Leave
To me this dosen't seem like a poem, it'd be very good as something like a diary entry, but that's something that you probably wouldn't post on here. That's only ...
Aug 19, 2013 -
Re: My Body is Not Poetry
This is great, though its sad in a way I loved it! The part about the thighs: My thighs are canvases for atlases, road maps, and interstate highways that lead ...
Aug 19, 2013 -
Re: Unbroken Part 1: Chapter Three
I love how descriptive you are with some things, it gives me a sense of what everything looks like. I kind of imagine that I'm there, I'm Bella, so it ...
Aug 19, 2013 -
Re: [Review Contest] Brave
All I can say is this is amazing! I didn't know exactly what he was gonna do when I read the description, I was like "Whoa. This sounds so cool, ...
Aug 19, 2013 -
Re: Fantasies and Daydreams Never End Like Fairy Tales and Lullabys
This is so great, my favourite part out of this would have to be: The many conversations that we would have, that mean nothing but everything all the same. Our ...
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: Drowning
I loved this, only because it's exactly how I'm feeling at the moment, I feel as though I'm being pushed back under, whenever something good happens, it just turns bad. ...
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: Winter
Hi, I'm Charley (obviously... ;D), It was great though there are a couple bits I'd like to point out that were a bit iffy to me. I believe you could ...
Aug 15, 2013
