Irrlichtchen

This is a lovely poem. It has a melancholic feel to it, but is very beautiful in that. I like how it doesn't reveal everything, but still enough to get ...

Hi :) I really like this piece. The theme you chose is really interesting. You begin with the great wonder that books are, and what it does with the reader. ...

This is a wonderful poem. The mystery, the choice of words ... it all adds to the feeling of this piece. Your grammar and spelling was great. I like it ...

This is a really nicely crafted poem I especially like the introducing lines "And she is a misty mountain Covered in grey, forever smiling. " This has an beautiful image ...

This is a nice poem. I really like the theme and atmosphere. This hace a nice flow overall and my favourite two line are: "But now I heal, I melt ...

Hi I am Alia This is a beautiful piece of poetry and I like it very much! The first stanza is good, but it didn't touch me or evoked any ...

Wow! I think I'm in love with this poem ;) No, but really it is really amazing. I like your topic and the different approach. The first stanza is kinda ...

This is an original idea, thats sure. It is quite cute actually. The first stanza (summer) is really good, and I like how you personificates (is that a word?) them, ...

This is really adorable! I love how good you portray the 10 year old YWS. The style of language you use when he talks, is just like a 10 year ...

This is really incredible! At first I was a bit ... well it is really long :D But amazing! It catched me right in the beginning. This has a really ...

I really like the topic of your essay/ article. And I think your approach of categorizing the readers is really well working here. Needless to say I completely agree with ...

I agree with gv7233. This is a wonderful little poem. The words you used all served an purpose and seemed to be carefully chosen. It reads really fluently. It has ...

This really cool. I like how you refer to the humans (my tired brain can't find a better word, sorry) as Whitecoats. It makes it more believable. I love how ...

Wow! This is truly amazing! Your vocabulary is really great and I am impressed. This really caught my attention and I couldn't stop reading it. I love your metaphors and ...

This is an good essay and I really like the topic you chose, as it isn't an easy one. I think you have a good structure; beginning with explaining sad ...