Generally, we describe our feelings rather as Happy or Sad. Same formula we use in case of life. Actually, these terms are not just like that. They have the most important value in a man’s life. We get these from a range of sources and of course it differs from person to person or age to age. But, the feelings you get with these two aren’t so different, no matter you are a baby or an old. Well, what is “Happy or Happiness” and what is “Sad or sadness.”
Happy- means when you are in fun, no tension, no stress, no sorrows.
Sad- is just antonym of “Happy.” When you are stressed, feeling like to cry means you are sad.
We all know this, right? And, I’m not even supposed to write to say all of these. Then what is it?
Is being happy too tough and getting sad too easy? That’s what I’m going to write about.
We are humans. Our lives are not bed of roses. Life’s either a journey or an exam- it’s up to you to decide. But, there are some common things about life. Like, it has ups and downs. It has joys and sorrows. It has victory and loses. Life is not that easy going or sort of a fairy tale. Moreover, you have born as Human so, you have to face few more difficulties than other species as you have got few more advantages than them.
Anyway, your life will keep going no matter what. Time will pass. And, at one time, you have to say “Goodbye” to this world. After that, perhaps, nothing will remain of you in this universe. You’ll be a gone thing, a trash. Unless, you do marvelous work (or so inhuman) for mankind. But, can all of us do such remarkable things in our lives? We can’t, sadly. If you could then each and every of us would be Nelson Mandela or Albert Einstein. Then, does it mean, our life’s spoiled? We have got nothing? And, should take part in a race to be unforgettable? Really no. You are not a machine, are you?
The real significance of life hides in being happy, trust me. It’s not necessary to have golden cashes in hands or to ride in limousine to be happy. It’s necessary to have big eyes and an open heart instead. Well, big eyes don’t mean real BIG eyes on your face! I’m talking about seeing and finding fun from even the stupidest stuffs. Try to be happy from every dimension. Laugh at anything, like kids, though you are growing up, no need to care if you’re being weird. Don’t always regret about things you’re not getting. Thus, taste what life offers to you. Play fun! And, you know what, learn from the kids. Who knows, they can make you understand that, you deserve better from your life and you by yourself can make life better. Sorrows will always be coming from a variety of sources. It’s kind of an endless flow. That doesn’t mean, happiness doesn’t exist. Snatch joy even from the heaviest grief. Try, no, not just try, you should unleash the cloud nine that loves to play hide & seek with you. I think, being sad is the hardest. So, why to try that in spite of having the easiest one in front of you?
Be the funny nerd at your school; let the perfect classy fellows laugh at you. But, you know what; they can’t laugh at melancholy like you!
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FacyDragon here! Hey sorry if i sounded mad i did not mean, too. Dx I like you and your writing!
Any way on to the review!!!!
no matter you are a baby or an old. This line sounds funny. lol I like how you defined the words and the way you phrased each definition.
That’s what I’m going to write about. Don't tell use show us.
It has victory and loses. Make victory victories.
Life is not that easy going or sort of a fairy tale. Maybe add some next to sort it might help the flow.
Moreover, you have born as Human so, you have to face few more difficulties than other species as you have got few more advantages than them. This line here you are missing some words that will help the flow of the line.
Time will pass. And, at one time, you have to say “Goodbye” to this world. Again if you would add some words here it would flow better.
Okay i am done dissecting your work lol i love the message! Just reread it and fix some of the missing words to help with the flow of your work.
Tag your it xD and keep up the good work.
Thanks for the suggestions and I'll look through them. ^.^
Hello! I'm here for a review (duh). Let's start with the nitpicks.
"you have to face few more difficulties than other species as you have got few more advantages than them." I think "as" should be replaced by "but" or "however." It seems better that way.
Other than that, the essay was good. I loved it, especially how you didn't waste time saying that everyone can do something great, because that's not true. This really does have a whole lot of truth. I enjoyed that aspect.
"And, you know what, learn from the kids." This is right; kids have fun doing almost anything. They know best how to stay happy.
Wonderful essay.
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This is an good essay and I really like the topic you chose, as it isn't an easy one. I think you have a good structure; beginning with explaining sad and happy as what we all know them to be and then proceeding to your "real" topic.
I especially like the part where you write that the people should learn from kids and should not bother being weird. This is so true! And as RandomCollumns already pointed out, the part about not needing an limousine to be happy.
My favourite line is "It’s necessary to have big eyes and an open heart instead."
Good work!
Thank you.
Well done, I loved reading this essay; I agreed with so many of your principles of life, especially the part about the limo (plus the only people who can have them are people with really long drives! And if you don't have chauffeur then it's not really worthwhile.) There are a few things that I picked up on though: "I think, being..." the comma shouldn't really be there, and I think part of it standing out, was the amount of commas in the essay; usually I use a lot of commas too, but when you use loads of them in one long big sentence it looks a little like a list, and not one leading onto another. Try adding a few hyphens and semi colons; then it will look a little less like a list.
Again, I really enjoyed reading this, Random Columns.
Thank you for reviewing it. I'll look through the stuffs you suggested to edit.
Thanks again!