IrishFire18

Wow. I could think of nothing else to say for five minutes. I completely understand where this is coming from -- I've been in this situation before. I can really ...

Hi there! I want to say a few things regarding this poem. First of all, I love it simply because of the fact that it rhymes! Second, I like it ...

Sol! Hello! Let me just tell you, I really like these lyrics. They're catchy, they're meaningful, and I bet they would sound awesome to music. It's interesting to me, too, ...

Hey there! For starters, I'd like to say that I love your wording in this. I adore the vocabulary used. I'm not very good with poetry, so I can't really ...

Let me start out by saying: I LOVE THIS. It makes so much sense, and it's hilarious to read at the same time. I can't tell you, honestly, how much ...

Neva, Let me just start out by saying hi. (: I guess Danno got to this piece before I did, but I wanted to read it by his recommendation anyways. ...

I'm not usually a big fan of poetry, but I am rather fond of this poem! It's safe, warm, and inviting. Almost like a parent to their child, or from ...

This is a very interesting piece. It's dark, it's horrific. I don't quite understand the full plot behind it, but I think it could be a really gripping piece if ...

This story is short. The grammatical errors are -to put it nicely- irritating. Your spacing is incorrect, each bit of dialogue needs its own line, and you should work on ...

I really like this, because (in most cases) that's what adults see when they look at teenagers. They see a hooligan who doesn't know what they're doing; a trouble maker ...

Hey, Chuck! This seems to be an interesting beginning to what could turn into a beautiful novel. It certainly caught my attention. However, I would like to point out that ...

Hello, bilauta! I feel like this poem is missing something. I'm not entirely sure what, though I wish I could tell you. It has a really good message to it, ...

Hey there! Okay. I really like this story. It seems happy at the beginning. They're in love, skipping class together in the rain. It's relatable for high school students, and ...

This piece was very nice. I liked how she described her feelings for him, no matter what he had become or what he'd done. I like how they'd barely talked ...

Hey there! I really liked this piece. It was simple and elegant, and it has a dream-like quality. I like how you described everything... It just flowed together. I think ...