InTheTrees

Hi! I haven't been on here for a while so here goes! First of all, I love your unconventional writing style. You've pulled off some great images and meaning without ...

This is fantastic! It has a sporadic rhythm that seems to actually capture the vibrations of an earthquake. I especially liked "Molten consonants apocalyptic". The way that tumbles off the ...

I find this extremely offensive. Reading your essay literally made me feel sick. How dare you judge people like this? Do you know what percentage of children put up for ...

Sorry about my blank reply before! It was a mistake >.> But on to the poem! This is stunning! Your meticulously crafted imagery and wordplay is delightful :) I especially ...

Hello! You remind me of my one friend from Ireland, but if she and Shel Silverstein were mixed together like yogurt. Anyway, review! I've noticed some other people mentioned that ...

Hi Sophiewrites! Thanks for your review before! This is a seriously gorgeous piece. The images and feelings really hit home, and it sounds very genuine, like it's coming from your ...

This is absolutely amazing. The description of the forest being filled and destroyed with smoke is beautiful, and the colors are really working for you. I'd love to read more ...

First of all, let me say that this is absolutely beautiful. I almost don't want to review it. (((All of my comments look like this.))) The small house is lit ...

(((All my comments look like this))) It was as if all that happened was yesterday. A nightmare. A dream. The truth. (((The truth? But you were just describing it as ...

I like this. It's almost satiric, and it grabs you. Just a suggestion: you might want to look at the second sentence, the part about money feels a little choppy. ...

One quick thing: it's "disintegrates" not "disintergrates". Great read. I like the on and off rhymn scheme, and the imagery is beautiful. My favorite line is "lifted palms, resting crows;". ...

Nice beginning, grabbed me right from the first line. This poem reminded me a lot of my friend who's in a band, and I found it very relatable. Just a ...

(((All off my comments start and end like this))) So, it’s true? says Jade. Yea, dad, it’s true, says Jay. And you just figured it out this last year? It ...