ImHero

You know, smile might be considered one syllable but most people read it like its two. Smi-LE Although I am not the best with tenses in poetry. I thought it ...

Hero here for a review, I feel like I say this alot but you need imagery and description. Your poem seems life-less rant. Someone might confuse it with a paragraph ...

Hey hero here, This was a bit refreshing to read. I think you try to hard and the metaphors seems too cliche. Although its nice. The rhythm was consistent and ...

Hello hero here, What is with the rhyming? It is a mess in this poem, I can't seem to get into any rhythm. Ryhming is totally unnecessary but if its ...

Hey persy

Hello, hero here. You are a fantastic writer. With that said I am not quite sure the syllables satisfy the rules of the sonnet but it has been a long ...

Hey Manisha, this one is a little hard-hitting and hard to read. (in a good way) However, if I where to suggest a change in the content it would most ...

Hero here, I believe this poem lacks an image and description to be emotional or interesting, to me. Instead of showing the story as it goes through you just use ...

Hey its Hero. This poem is unique and written okay. I just don't see the excitement. What is it that puts this poem over the top? The theme? The idea? ...

Hello, Hero here. When I read your poem I just ask myself what. It seems like a clump of random words without a purpose to do anything but keep the ...

Hey, great poem. I don't think the image was perfect, as in, the medafore for it needs some work. If you are going to be comparing toes to a relationship ...

Hey, great poem. I would like to point out that the rhythm captured in the first two lines wasn't always persistent. Also, at times the original content was altered for ...

Three likes, you are very under-rated. I want to convey something, 'cause often we get caught up into the mechanics and not really think that these are real emotions or ...

ImHero here to review! What I like? -the images -the breaks and stops half way through adds rythm What can be improved? -I think it can be more realistic. add ...

This is ImHero here for the review! Content: Now I can't quite pin-down what you are talking about, we had a very long discussion as to what it is, but ...