ImHero here to review!
What I like?
-the images
-the breaks and stops half way through adds rythm
What can be improved?
-I think it can be more realistic. add personal experience and say something true about her. I mean you are practically generalizing what every girl wants to hear and it comes out forced and seems unrealistic.
-more specific images- the moon, halo they have all been used way too much.
-"eternal" seems out of place, you are saying she is beauty eternal?
I hope I helped even a little in this review. Also, thank you for writing
Your Hero
ImHero
Points: 240
Reviews: 110
Donate