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  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Bella, Horida Bella

    Hiya, Ilium here for a review!! First off, I LOVE Latin (if my username couldn't tell you). Its probably my favorite language because English is just so crappy. It's like ...

    Jan 31, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    Hi, Ilium here for a review! I love how this poem doesn't try to have any nuanced meanings. A poem with this topic deserves to have straightforward writing, which you ...

    Jan 2, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: somedays imaginings

    Heyo! This is Ilium for a review! :D OMGOSH THIS WAS SUCH A GOOD POEM!! Ahem, uh, sorry about that. Anyway, I really liked this poem! For me, it represented ...

    Jun 25, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Childhood Plans

    Ilium here for a review! This was an awesome poem, bro! I've been thinking about this a lot recently and the way you put it into words is glorious. The ...

    Apr 18, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: quiet hello, quiet goodbye

    Hi! Ilium here for a review! WHY THE TACO ISN'T THIS ON THE LITERARY SPOTLIGHT, THIS IS SUPER AWESOME!!! Ok, now that that outburst is done, let's get to the ...

    Apr 17, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: What animals see

    Heya, Ilium here for a review! OMGOSH THIS WAS A GREAT POEM. Bro, I love this so much, great job! :D What you wrote about it was soo true- we ...

    Apr 17, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Steel Hole-In-The-Wall - Chapter One

    Hiya! Ilium here for a review! I liked this chapter. It was pretty interesting! I'm intrigued to know why the world is going to end in twenty minutes. About the ...

    Apr 16, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: A Dance That Never Was

    Hiii! Ilium here for a small review! First off, I can relate to this SOO much! Personally, I've liked a girl at my school for years, but we've never had ...

    Apr 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Culture, Health Re: The Mirror

    Hiii! Ilium here for a review! I liked the idea of your poem. Mirrors are really poetic and it's cool to see how people use them in different ways. I ...

    Apr 15, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Two Kinds of Rain

    Heyo! Ilium here for a quick review! This poem was amazing! It had so much symbolism and so much power in it, I really wanted it to keep going. (It ...

    Apr 14, 2021
  • Poetry » Satire, Realistic Re: Signs of time

    Heyo! Ilium here for a review! This poem had a really interesting concept, one that I relate to a lot. I go a classical education school so we look more ...

    Apr 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: All petals are about to fall

    Hey, Ilium here for a quick review! :D This is an interesting concept for a poem, one that I really like a lot! I wasn't expecting it to be about ...

    Apr 11, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: The Augury of RiverClan - Chapter 1.2

    Hey! Ilium here for a review! Man, this was action-packed! You did a good job of describing what was happening. There were times when I wish there was a little ...

    Mar 13, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Chapter 1

    Hey hey! I'm here for a review! :D The first thing I noticed was the use of dialogue as the first line. It's one of my personal favorite ways to ...

    Mar 13, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: The Augury of RiverClan - Chapter 1.1

    This is awesome! Cool story. The names, man, they're awesome XD Like 'Lightningsong'? That's so cool. A review is supposed to be a critique, so here's a couple things I ...

    Mar 12, 2021


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