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Re: Bella, Horida Bella
Hiya, Ilium here for a review!! First off, I LOVE Latin (if my username couldn't tell you). Its probably my favorite language because English is just so crappy. It's like ...
Jan 31, 2022 -
Re: My Best Friend is Gay.
Hi, Ilium here for a review! I love how this poem doesn't try to have any nuanced meanings. A poem with this topic deserves to have straightforward writing, which you ...
Jan 2, 2022 -
Re: somedays imaginings
Heyo! This is Ilium for a review! :D OMGOSH THIS WAS SUCH A GOOD POEM!! Ahem, uh, sorry about that. Anyway, I really liked this poem! For me, it represented ...
Jun 25, 2021 -
Re: Childhood Plans
Ilium here for a review! This was an awesome poem, bro! I've been thinking about this a lot recently and the way you put it into words is glorious. The ...
Apr 18, 2021 -
Re: quiet hello, quiet goodbye
Hi! Ilium here for a review! WHY THE TACO ISN'T THIS ON THE LITERARY SPOTLIGHT, THIS IS SUPER AWESOME!!! Ok, now that that outburst is done, let's get to the ...
Apr 17, 2021 -
Re: What animals see
Heya, Ilium here for a review! OMGOSH THIS WAS A GREAT POEM. Bro, I love this so much, great job! :D What you wrote about it was soo true- we ...
Apr 17, 2021 -
Re: The Steel Hole-In-The-Wall - Chapter One
Hiya! Ilium here for a review! I liked this chapter. It was pretty interesting! I'm intrigued to know why the world is going to end in twenty minutes. About the ...
Apr 16, 2021 -
Re: A Dance That Never Was
Hiii! Ilium here for a small review! First off, I can relate to this SOO much! Personally, I've liked a girl at my school for years, but we've never had ...
Apr 15, 2021 -
Re: The Mirror
Hiii! Ilium here for a review! I liked the idea of your poem. Mirrors are really poetic and it's cool to see how people use them in different ways. I ...
Apr 15, 2021 -
Re: Two Kinds of Rain
Heyo! Ilium here for a quick review! This poem was amazing! It had so much symbolism and so much power in it, I really wanted it to keep going. (It ...
Apr 14, 2021 -
Re: Signs of time
Heyo! Ilium here for a review! This poem had a really interesting concept, one that I relate to a lot. I go a classical education school so we look more ...
Apr 12, 2021 -
Re: All petals are about to fall
Hey, Ilium here for a quick review! :D This is an interesting concept for a poem, one that I really like a lot! I wasn't expecting it to be about ...
Apr 11, 2021 -
Re: The Augury of RiverClan - Chapter 1.2
Hey! Ilium here for a review! Man, this was action-packed! You did a good job of describing what was happening. There were times when I wish there was a little ...
Mar 13, 2021 -
Re: Chapter 1
Hey hey! I'm here for a review! :D The first thing I noticed was the use of dialogue as the first line. It's one of my personal favorite ways to ...
Mar 13, 2021 -
Re: The Augury of RiverClan - Chapter 1.1
This is awesome! Cool story. The names, man, they're awesome XD Like 'Lightningsong'? That's so cool. A review is supposed to be a critique, so here's a couple things I ...
Mar 12, 2021
