Poetry » Realistic, Review
Wow, this is beautifully written. The attention the detail is INCREDIBLE. And the ending had me in tears. The way you blended the words was genius on your part. You ...
Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic
Re: The Girl Playing Dress Up-Chapter 7
Hey! Ignorance is here for a review definitely not because I need the points haha… /lh I really enjoyed this chapter. I’ve never read this story, but I was quickly ...
Short Story » Technology, Other
Re: Story of Kazam EV
Hey there! Ignorance here for a review. I liked the wording on this! Right off the bat, I could tell it was gonna be informantional. That’s a good thing to ...
Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General
Re: Sanders Sides Oneshots (pt. 1)
...you simp, you did this on purpose xD /lh In all honesty, I really liked this! It had a nice flow to it, and the descriptions were nice as well. ...
Art » Narrative, Spiritual
Re: It said, “Nothing?”
Hey there! I just wanted to say that I really loved this. The vagueness made me on the edge of my seat at all times, just waiting to see what ...
Poetry » Realistic, General
Heya! Gem here, let’s review. Pros I love this theme! Now, I have never had a sibling go to college, so I’m not sure whether or not this is exactly ...
Poetry » Realistic, General
Re: Walking Fast - The Spooky Revision
Good evening, or whatever time of day it is for you! Gem here with a review. (Hey, that rhymed lol) Pros I think this is a really nice poem. It’s ...
Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror
Re: When The Birds Came (WIP - NaNoWriMo)
Heya! I think this is a really good set up for a set up. The vague, ominous tone and the descriptions really help set the mood. However, I do believe ...
Short Story » General, General
Hey! Gem here to leave a review. Pros ...WOW. This story is incredibly powerful, and really brings light to a big issue in our society. You start to ponder what ...
Poetry » Literature, Dramatic
Hey there! Gem here for a review. Pros I love the descriptions. You clearly showed the initial panic, the struggle, and then the peacefulness of drowning. You clearly have a ...
Poetry » General, Realistic
Re: Would It Be So Bad?
Heya! Gem here for a review: Pros Okay, I loved this. Finally, someone says it so I don’t have to! ”I don’t want him to catch autism!” Autism doesn’t come ...
Poetry » Fantasy, Fantasy
Re: Clouds of music and Roads of joy.
Heya! Gem here with a quick review for review day. Pros I love that it’s so short and simple but at the same time so touching. Just enjoying the little ...
Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
Re: Prayer to the Goddess- Apex Legends Fan Poem
Heyo! Gem here with a review. Compliments: I have never played nor learned anything about Apex legends, but I absolutely LOVED this! Shes the golden light In my broken dark ...
Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
Re: falling out of love
Heya! galaxygem here to leave a quick review. First of all, who hurt you? I can feel the heartbreak in this poem, I swear! Falling out of love, as you ...
Short Story » Horror, General
Re: The Closet
Whoa! I really liked this one. I feel like the skeleton-thing in the closet was either the victims of the kills or Matt’s guilt, and either way it’s very clever. ...