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  • Poetry » Realistic, Review
    Re: .

    Wow, this is beautifully written. The attention the detail is INCREDIBLE. And the ending had me in tears. The way you blended the words was genius on your part. You ...

    Feb 3, 2023

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: The Girl Playing Dress Up-Chapter 7

    Hey! Ignorance is here for a review definitely not because I need the points haha… /lh I really enjoyed this chapter. I’ve never read this story, but I was quickly ...

    Jul 2, 2021

  • Short Story » Technology, Other
    Re: ​Story of Kazam EV

    Hey there! Ignorance here for a review. I liked the wording on this! Right off the bat, I could tell it was gonna be informantional. That’s a good thing to ...

    Jul 1, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General
    Re: Sanders Sides Oneshots (pt. 1)

    ...you simp, you did this on purpose xD /lh In all honesty, I really liked this! It had a nice flow to it, and the descriptions were nice as well. ...

    Mar 3, 2021

  • Art » Narrative, Spiritual
    Re: It said, “Nothing?”

    Hey there! I just wanted to say that I really loved this. The vagueness made me on the edge of my seat at all times, just waiting to see what ...

    Feb 22, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Sister

    Heya! Gem here, let’s review. Pros I love this theme! Now, I have never had a sibling go to college, so I’m not sure whether or not this is exactly ...

    Nov 22, 2020

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Walking Fast - The Spooky Revision

    Good evening, or whatever time of day it is for you! Gem here with a review. (Hey, that rhymed lol) Pros I think this is a really nice poem. It’s ...

    Nov 1, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror
    Re: When The Birds Came (WIP - NaNoWriMo)

    Heya! I think this is a really good set up for a set up. The vague, ominous tone and the descriptions really help set the mood. However, I do believe ...

    Nov 1, 2020

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Uncomfortable

    Hey! Gem here to leave a review. Pros ...WOW. This story is incredibly powerful, and really brings light to a big issue in our society. You start to ponder what ...

    Oct 26, 2020

  • Poetry » Literature, Dramatic
    Re: Breathe

    Hey there! Gem here for a review. Pros I love the descriptions. You clearly showed the initial panic, the struggle, and then the peacefulness of drowning. You clearly have a ...

    Oct 9, 2020

  • Poetry » General, Realistic
    Re: Would It Be So Bad?

    Heya! Gem here for a review: Pros Okay, I loved this. Finally, someone says it so I don’t have to! ”I don’t want him to catch autism!” Autism doesn’t come ...

    Sep 8, 2020

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Fantasy
    Re: Clouds of music and Roads of joy.

    Heya! Gem here with a quick review for review day. Pros I love that it’s so short and simple but at the same time so touching. Just enjoying the little ...

    Aug 29, 2020

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: Prayer to the Goddess- Apex Legends Fan Poem

    Heyo! Gem here with a review. Compliments: I have never played nor learned anything about Apex legends, but I absolutely LOVED this! Shes the golden light In my broken dark ...

    Aug 1, 2020

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: falling out of love

    Heya! galaxygem here to leave a quick review. First of all, who hurt you? I can feel the heartbreak in this poem, I swear! Falling out of love, as you ...

    Jun 29, 2020

  • Short Story » Horror, General
    Re: The Closet

    Whoa! I really liked this one. I feel like the skeleton-thing in the closet was either the victims of the kills or Matt’s guilt, and either way it’s very clever. ...

    May 21, 2020

No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
— LCDR Geordi La Forge