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What a windy day it was. That line is the cherry on top of this beautiful piece of writing. The inner turmoil inside this man is clear, and it’s left ...
Jan 7, 2024
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This poem is beautiful! The way you personify death is truly stunning. A line that hit me most was the final two. Death clearly longs for more to their existence, ...
Jan 7, 2024
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Wow, this is beautifully written. The attention the detail is INCREDIBLE. And the ending had me in tears. The way you blended the words was genius on your part. You ...
Feb 3, 2023
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Hey! Ignorance is here for a review definitely not because I need the points haha… /lh I really enjoyed this chapter. I’ve never read this story, but I was quickly ...
Jul 2, 2021
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Hey there! Ignorance here for a review. I liked the wording on this! Right off the bat, I could tell it was gonna be informantional. That’s a good thing to ...
Jul 1, 2021
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...you simp, you did this on purpose xD /lh In all honesty, I really liked this! It had a nice flow to it, and the descriptions were nice as well. ...
Mar 3, 2021
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Hey there! I just wanted to say that I really loved this. The vagueness made me on the edge of my seat at all times, just waiting to see what ...
Feb 22, 2021
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Heya! Gem here, let’s review. Pros I love this theme! Now, I have never had a sibling go to college, so I’m not sure whether or not this is exactly ...
Nov 22, 2020
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Good evening, or whatever time of day it is for you! Gem here with a review. (Hey, that rhymed lol) Pros I think this is a really nice poem. It’s ...
Nov 1, 2020
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Heya! I think this is a really good set up for a set up. The vague, ominous tone and the descriptions really help set the mood. However, I do believe ...
Nov 1, 2020
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Hey! Gem here to leave a review. Pros ...WOW. This story is incredibly powerful, and really brings light to a big issue in our society. You start to ponder what ...
Oct 26, 2020
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Hey there! Gem here for a review. Pros I love the descriptions. You clearly showed the initial panic, the struggle, and then the peacefulness of drowning. You clearly have a ...
Oct 9, 2020
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Heya! Gem here for a review: Pros Okay, I loved this. Finally, someone says it so I don’t have to! ”I don’t want him to catch autism!” Autism doesn’t come ...
Sep 8, 2020
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Heya! Gem here with a quick review for review day. Pros I love that it’s so short and simple but at the same time so touching. Just enjoying the little ...
Aug 29, 2020
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Heyo! Gem here with a review. Compliments: I have never played nor learned anything about Apex legends, but I absolutely LOVED this! Shes the golden light In my broken dark ...
Aug 1, 2020
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