Heya MoonIris,
Shady here with a quick review for you this fine evening! Let's get started...
I’m laying in bed,
my music is loud,
but only I can hear it.
I like this opening! It paints a poignent mental image that slowly gets more and more specific as we go, from the loud music, to listening to it in earbuds/headphones. It's a nice way to frame the scene!
I got a lump in my throat
because I know I’m going to sing the words wrong,
but that doesn’t stop me.
Is that a Riptide reference xD
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I really like this poem! It's short and simple, but it still carries with it a certain level of emotion that I think we all can relate to, in music being a sort of consoling force in our lives, even as we lay alone in our bed.
It's not a long poem so I don't have a long review for you, but I did really enjoy this work! Great work!
Keep writing and Happy RevMo!
~Shady
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