Ignatius5453

It wasn't easy to read it. It was long and dragged on, but very good. When I finally got up the courage to finish it instead of debating on whether ...

It was good, not overly great but, it wasnt poor either. When I read it it seemed lacking in emotion though, it uses descriptive words and vivid feeling, I just ...

It was good, not overly great but, it wasnt poor either. When I read it it seemed lacking in emotion though, it uses descriptive words and vivid feeling, I just ...

Jesus power! I felt it all the way through, best thing I've read today! Keep Writing!

Absolutely, positively, amazing. Somehow, I walk into peace... But why are my feelings the same? I felt these two lines, they dont make sense, yet they make so much sense. ...

Not a bad poem, just a little hard to read, I couldnt find any rhythm in it, and well... it was somewhat lacking in subject matter. Spice it up a ...

Awh this was so sad. I feel for those people that are abused, I wish I could do something, and this poem really brings out that feeling. Great wording, great ...

You've already gotten a lot input and a lot of good advice, so all I'm going to say is I liked it.

Very interesting title, and the poem was good too. I liked it, well because who likes wearing pants? Not me! Keep Writing!

Good job, I liked the description, it was like I was actually looking at it.

Well done, I can't find anything wrong, at all. I felt the emotion in it. Loved it! Keep Writing!

No grammar errors, but you could use some punctuation. I liked the poem, because so many times there are people like that all around you, just asking to be noticed. ...

Great job, I felt the intensity and passion in the words, I thought it was legen..... wait for it..... dary. 8/10 Keep Writing!

When I first read about the food going up your nose, I got scared this poem was going to be off the wall, but all in all it wasnt bad, ...

I liked it, I wouldnt change a thing, it flowed perfectly and it was just overall good.