Ignatius5453

I read the original one, and possibly reviewed it, don't remember. But from what I remember it was good. Well, this one was even better. If you will let me ...

It was fresh and new, I haven't really seen much like it on here. You sure got your point across, I really felt the jitters and all of the emotions ...

My heart just melted. I want to hug you sooo much right now. This was touching, beautiful. I read every syllable of it, every word, didn't skim at all. It ...

I couldn't get what you were saying, it seemed topically you were jumping all over the place. And you mixed up "here" and "hear" and you pluralized "water" Keep Writing!

I once recall you saying, "Writing poems without rhyming is like playing tennis with the net down." You might have proved yourself wrong with this one. Very good job! Keep ...

I didn't get it... Well, the first stanza was good. Then... well, it kind of.... fell off of a cliff. Like the entire thing disintegrated. Maybe just keep the first ...

Great job, I couldn't have written something like this any better than you have, I don't think anybody could have. I sincerely liked it. Good Job! Never, ever stop writing!

Haha, it was great. Not at all serious, an extremely fun read, it had no purpose or meaning, other than to exist, perfect job on those haikus, I couldn't write ...

I. Have. A. Splitting. Headache. And. I. Blame. You! It took me a second time reading through it, and I'm, still not sure if I got it, well done! It ...

Well, apart from horrid punctuation, this was perfect. I loved your spacing, it's not in jumbles like a lot of other poems, it flowed perfectly too, and I loved the ...

I understand you were trying to convey a message, and i got the message, but ti wasn't that strong, the words didnt seem to fit together and I really didnt ...

Very good. Even if the punctuation hadn't been meant to be like that, I wouldn't have said anything, it just complements the poem so well, I liked it a lot. ...

It was very random. But not bad, obviously it's a little unfinsihed, it could do with some revision and maybe a few line changes, but ti wasn't bad, and I ...

Well, it was interesting. I haven't read many poem like this, it was short and easy to read. And the imagery as great, I just didn't really feel the words ...

Haha, it was great! I liked it a lot. It was short enough that I didn't have to invest that much time into reading it, and long enough so you ...