Yesterday

by Animallovermary

Published June 4, 2011

If yesterday was Sunday
And tomorrow is today
Yesterday was the day afterwards
And Monday's Saturday
If tomorrow will someday be yesterday
And yesterday is today
If Tuesday is today
But also tomorrow
Then were are we at today?

Think about it!!!!!

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SubjectBlue
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SubjectBlue wrote a review Review · Jul 3, 2011

wait, what day is what?
forget that, what day is today?
now i'm really confused, but that's awesome.
confusing means interesting, i'm so fascinated due to the poem right now that I'll have to read it again.
if you will do another one on months I'll completely lose it so be careful, and remember: "with great power comes great responsibility" (I mean, I like power, but how can I hang out with him if that annoying little leech keeps following us.)

sorry for spamming a little, I cant really control it.

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Ignatius5453
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Ignatius5453 commented Comment · Jun 5, 2011

I. Have. A. Splitting. Headache. And. I. Blame. You! It took me a second time reading through it, and I'm, still not sure if I got it, well done! It was very amusing, a fun read. Keep Writing!

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NathanielC
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NathanielC commented Comment · Jun 5, 2011

I tried, over and over. But all I got was Error 404 on this one! Good brain buzzer, though. Gave me something tricky to solve today! Nice!

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Justagirl
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Justagirl wrote a review Review · Jun 4, 2011

Ok, I've read this over twice and then I tried to figure it out and my fizzled out. I think I'd better not try to solve it again or I might short-circuit or something XD

So, this is really confusing but you must be really smart to have made it up all by yourself. :) Great job, because I would totally fail at it.

Keep writing,
Alzora

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germsieGal
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germsieGal commented Comment · Jun 4, 2011

oh my. I got confused in the first line. But I like, it's very interesting. I'm going to figure it out now :D



The tools of conquest do not necessarily come with bombs and explosions and fallout. There are weapons that are simply thoughts, attitudes, prejudices; to be found only in the minds of men. For the record, prejudices can kill, and suspicions can destroy. A thoughtless, frightened search for a scapegoat has a fallout all of its own.
— Rod Serling, Twilight Zone