Ignatius5453

It was epic. Like legen..... wait for it...... dary! Every part of that was soooooo true. People say hate is a strong word, but so is love and everybody throws ...

You had a very solid idea, and you put your message out there, but I feel you focused too much on the idea, and not enough on the rhythm or ...

It was okay, a tiny bit raw in places, like you just threw words down, but it did have some meaning, and I actually enjoyed reading it. The best part ...

Well. To start off, the huge wall of text is daunting. I can say from experience that if you don't break down the poem into stanzas or manageable reading lines, ...

It was cute, short and quaint. Obviously there are some tiny errors since you wrote it when you were 10, but it was overall really good. I especially liked the ...

You may not like it, but I did... a lot. It was good. Often the ones that just just into your head are the best ones because they are pure ...

Ok, I'm in the mood to nitpick right now so here goes: So I know that you’re lying, I’ve been hurt many times, o! I wish you knew. My heart ...

Great poem, the words like jumped off the screen at me, it was like they were alive, you put so much oomph and emotion into them, great job. My favorite ...

And then I got it! The teachers secretly work under an evil person who doesn't want smart and talented children, in fear that they, we, might spoil his evil plan ...

Well, it was... interesting. I didn't get it, and it was sort of, off-color, you could say, but it was good none-the-less. Entertaining. One thing you could do is to ...

It was good. Again, you've done a great job. I'm starting to really like your poetry. I personally like summer best, but now I'm not so sure, you might have ...

It was good, not overly great but, it wasnt poor either. When I read it it seemed lacking in emotion though, it uses descriptive words and vivid feeling, I just ...

Great job. I'm a really devout christian and I felt the depth of your words, and I can say I believe every little bit is true. The first stanza was ...

Well, well, well, well, well. I didnt like it that much.... I loved it. I really felt emotion in your words, I could feel every little part of your "hold", ...

I loved the entire thing, the people above me nitpicked you pretty clean, and other than what they said I cant find anything else to say about the poem, but ...