IamTraunt

You are one lucky Cricket! Hey, Cuz! I'm like reviewing all your new works. Nitpicks! Sorry I only have 6 nitpicks, but SOMEONE *looks at Timmy* nitpicked this to death. ...

Hey, Cousin Therese! Nitpicks! As a glowing light came over the horizon, a sleepy village lay nestled in a valley, unaware of the new day that was dawning .The birds ...

Hey, jessiethought! Okay, so I'll try to be as helpful as possible. But I will probably just end up constantly commending you through out this review ^^ Right. Let's get ...

Hey, tjmorton! Welcome to Young Writers Society! Woah. This was just... Wow. Simply put, it was powerful. What caught my attention most was the lack of punctuation and capital letters ...

Hey, Gummy! What an intriguing poem! So, immediately I thought when reading this: the speaker of this poem is very self-conscious, straight away they go into how they are like ...

Hey, LMJRayner! I liked how you opened up withe reasons of sorrow: Some would see the world a darker place now, Because they are left with an empty space in ...

Hey there, IdaPhillips! Nitpicks! Amylace woke up one morning with a bored scowl on her face, completely unaware that that particular morning would prove to be an especially miserable one ...

Hey! This was really beautiful. I just want to commend you for this. The imagery is so effect, the first two lines are an example of that. You don't just ...

Hey, your cousin here to review (as promised). Nitpicks! Swinging his horse forward, beside Sier de Gourcout, Jean nodded in the direction of the girl, now being moved onto a ...

Aloha! Here for a quick review! Nitpicks! Something--many things, actually--struck my face, and I rolled my eyes in time to see the deck of cards flutter down onto the beige ...

Hey! IamTraunt here to review this beautiful poem. Toga : a loose flowing outer garment worn by the citizens of ancient Rome, made of a single piece of cloth and ...

Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Well, I see girlwiththelaptop has gone through all the basics, plot, flow; ect, so I'll talk about corrections as you said you needed help with ...

Hey! IamTraunt here to review! Before I go into the storyline, I'll just go through some nitpicks: Their classmates stared wondering how these two friends could possibly even allow this ...

Hallo, Marvel Freund! Okay, so I'm gonna go straight in there and do my stuff. Nitpicks! When did -- where was-- Now, I know that some software on laptops and ...

Hey there! I love this free verse poem! I love the aura about it. It is truly thrilling. Nitpicks! As you climb through the airs gentle pull, you lose the ...