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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Blue Oceans (2 of 3)

    Hey There – Wow. This was an intriguing poem to read. It had a varied rhythm (sorry – that peeves me… I’m a musician…) but it was balanced somehow… Very ...

    Nov 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Free Babar Ahmad

    Hey There - Sorry this was so long in the coming! I haven't been on in a while. Okay! So this is your first poem, eh? I must say, I’m ...

    Nov 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Hear No Silence

    Hey There - I loved this. I saw it in the recommended section and couldn't resist! ;) The picture it paints was so vivid, so clear in my mind… I ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: A Void

    Hey there - Let me first say - I was thoroughly impressed. Absolutely. So moving. I loved your play on words with the title. Very nice touch. (or so I ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Poetry » General, General Re: -

    Hey There - I must say - I liked this. There was a lot of imagery in it - and a lot of emotion. The rhythm was confusing, though - ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Life

    Hey There - First off - I want to say there was some serious contemplation going on after reading 'Life'. It really makes you think. But, alas, it was a ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Expression Of The Voiceless

    Hey There - Wow. I was... I dunno - the feeling was indescribable. You have got some talent. Let me begin: First of all, your style is very unconventional - ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: That Special Week

    Hey there - plz excuse my rushed responce - im half asleep here - but I couldnt resist. Oh man! what a poem! It was hysterical. I loved it. (I ...

    Nov 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Live A Lie

    Hey There - THis was very touching to read. You learn a lot. There is a flow, and I am all about rhythm, but I can't put my finger on ...

    Nov 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Frozen

    Hey There - This was an interesting piece. I really liked it - But I have a few comments to make. Firstly - the beginning has a wonderful little rhythm ...

    Nov 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Label Me As You May

    Hey There - Wow. There is so much in this poem... It doesn't follow a specific pattern rhythm wise, and that is different and intriguing I liked it's diversity, but ...

    Nov 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Purple Walls

    Hey There - Sorry this is so rushed - Im out of time! But had to say how incredible this was. This room is haunted by acts of pain, suicide ...

    Nov 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: What you've done to me

    Okay, forgetmeknot, first I'd like to say nice name - very creative! So this is your first attempt at poetry, eh? I'm impressed - there is some real potential here. ...

    Nov 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Removed

    Hey There - Wow. I was thoroughly impressed. I am Korean and I have never heard of Sijo. Go figure! Anyway - I liked this a lot. There is a ...

    Nov 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Treehouse

    Hey There - Oh man, where to begin... I loved this. Love love loved it. Such creativity. This is why we read, am I right or left? (If that confused ...

    Nov 1, 2011


How odd I can have all this inside me and to you it’s just words.
— David Foster Wallace