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Of course! I adore the way you wrote this and I'm definitely going to have to look at your other works when I have the time :))

I only just realised that I never responded, so here we go: pretty early on, you said you thought that maybe you were looking too deep into it, but got ...

the stage directions a purely stylistic, as the story centres around film and filmmaking

basically i write the chapters first and then insert screenplay stuff so that its only in the necessary moments and i dotn obnoxiously over use it

hey! thank you for the review! 1- screen play stuff: so i couldn't find any moments in this chapter to stick in the screenplay stuff (although I really wanted to) ...

hey, sorry i came back to this so late. The companion piece used to be related, but i thought about it and felt they were better seperate. The jarring feeling ...

Hey! Thank you for the review :) 1) fixed! 2) ill reword it slightly, but it's supposed to be something like "compared to this, all else is nothing" 3)yes, the ...

Hey, Imogene here! I love this piece! It hits every little thing in all the right ways, dare I say: pushing and pulling. I love how it tugs on my ...

fixed the title, sorry about that!

I mean, there's definitely been babies small enough to fit in their dad's hand, but they often die young, suffer complications later in life, or go through drastic measures to ...

violin's was actually correct, but other than that i agree with this review :)

:)

im pretty sure the trusting thing relates to the witch trusting others, like "she is a trusting person"

the stanza thing was really annoying, yws has a tendency to stick everything together even if you paste/type seperate stanzas. punctuation is fixed, thank you!