a/n: review whatever you want idk what this is yet it kinda just came to me
It was the dead of night on August twenty-ninth, 2004, when she was born. A beautiful baby girl, who arrived early into this world, the exactly thirty centimetres. Her grandmother showered her first grandchild with gifts and presents and everything she would need for the next few months. Everything was there for her. She had everything she, a toddler, could ever want.
Four years passed, and lots had happened. Her family of three shifted houses four times, every year, and finally settled into a townhouse in the middle of the city. She had a beautiful big room all to herself, her own swing set inside her room, and a gorgeous view of the city from her window.
Once they had made their space in that community, she started noticing her mother's stomach start to get bigger and bigger. She asked her mother once, "Why do you eat so much?"
Her mother laughed and hugged her, telling her there was a surprise.
She hated surprises. The wait, the suspense, it was too much for her, so she asked her mother every day about it. Bugged her mother 'till she was yelled at and told to go up to her room. Her mother seemed moodier by the day. She didn't like it, so that day, she walked out of the house through the back door, and like the toddler she was, got distracted and started chasing one of the cats she had noticed crossing the cross walk.
And within a minute, everything went pitch black.
a/n: oook crazy turn of events i was not expecting that to happen lol. i don't really even know what happened and am too scared to read it over because i know i'll just not end up sharing it with you guys haha. but what do you think? does this sound like something you'd read? do you think the prologue could be extended? do the pronouns get confusing or too repetitive? constructive criticism is welcome!
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