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  • Poetry » Supernatural, Dramatic
    Re: Catalyst

    Hey, Zekcede here! I really like the flow of the story in this poem and the way you use the quotations without them being redundant. My favourite line was "breath ...

    Jul 14, 2021

  • Other » Realistic, General
    Re: The Foreseeable Future

    Hey, Zekcede here! This is amazing! It's really interesting to read things like this, I find them extremely intriguing because it's cool to look at other people's thoughts on things ...

    May 13, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: intrusive thoughts

    Hey Zekcede here! This is really good! I like how the rhythm is irregular, it keeps the poem from being boring :p. I also really like the question at the ...

    May 11, 2021

  • Art » Romantic, General
    Re: don't try to stop me

    Hey, Zekcede here! First of all, your poem made me cry tears. Like I am not kidding, I was just sitting at my desk minding my own business, reading poetry ...

    Apr 22, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: We Lift Our Burdens

    Hey, Zekcede here! I really loved this poem! The slightly melodic quality to it is almost horrifying in the way it kind of feels like being suspended in nothingness. Your ...

    Apr 22, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: strangled

    Hey, Zekcede here! I loved this so much! I really love the tone and rhythm, and how you use metaphors like "strangled by your fear." My favourite line is "choked ...

    Apr 20, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Adieu!

    Hey, Zekcede here! Thsis is really cute! I like that its really short and simple but also has a pretty meaningful(?) background. I also really like the rhyme scheme in ...

    Apr 13, 2021

  • Poetry » General, Romantic
    Re: Coloring Outside The Lines

    Hey, Zekcede here with a review! I love this so much! I love the way it describes childhood innocence in a way that isn't extremely bland and boring. The narrator ...

    Apr 6, 2021

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General
    Re: go home

    Hey! Zekcede here! I’m here to review this absolutely stunning song by you, soundofmind! so first of all, my thoughts whilst listening: at the beginning, I thought you sounded a ...

    Apr 5, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure
    Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 13.1]

    Hey! Zekcede here, The first thing I want to say is that this is absolutely beautiful, and it left me speechless. The first time I read through it I had ...

    Apr 5, 2021

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic
    Re: How Can I? (NaPo Poem #1)

    Hey! Zekcede here, The first thing I want to say is that this is absolutely beautiful, and it left me speechless. The first time I read through it I had ...

    Apr 5, 2021

  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Culture
    Re: named for the heavens

    Hey, Zekcede here. I love this so much! I read it without prior context, but I'm going to go read the work you wrote just to get some background later. ...

    Apr 1, 2021

  • Poetry » Horror, Science Fiction
    Re: The Dead Land

    This is amazing!! Hey, Zekcede here. I love this so much!! I love how you separate the different parts, and my favourite line is: "The traveler speaks of a valley ...

    Apr 1, 2021

  • Other » General, General
    Re: The Sub-Creator

    Hey, Zekcede here! This is so interesting! I was wondering, is this supposed to have been over a phone/communication device, or is it in person? I also wanted to ask ...

    Apr 1, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General
    Re: The Augury of RiverClan - 3.2

    Hey! Zekcede here! This was really intriguing and I'm looking forward to reading more! There were very few things I wanted to point out that haven't already been pointed out ...

    Apr 1, 2021


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