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Re: The Foreseeable Future
Hey, Zekcede here! This is amazing! It's really interesting to read things like this, I find them extremely intriguing because it's cool to look at other people's thoughts on things ...
May 13, 2021 -
Re: intrusive thoughts
Hey Zekcede here! This is really good! I like how the rhythm is irregular, it keeps the poem from being boring :p. I also really like the question at the ...
May 11, 2021 -
Re: don't try to stop me
Hey, Zekcede here! First of all, your poem made me cry tears. Like I am not kidding, I was just sitting at my desk minding my own business, reading poetry ...
Apr 22, 2021 -
Re: We Lift Our Burdens
Hey, Zekcede here! I really loved this poem! The slightly melodic quality to it is almost horrifying in the way it kind of feels like being suspended in nothingness. Your ...
Apr 22, 2021 -
Re: strangled
Hey, Zekcede here! I loved this so much! I really love the tone and rhythm, and how you use metaphors like "strangled by your fear." My favourite line is "choked ...
Apr 21, 2021 -
Re: Adieu!
Hey, Zekcede here! Thsis is really cute! I like that its really short and simple but also has a pretty meaningful(?) background. I also really like the rhyme scheme in ...
Apr 13, 2021 -
Re: Coloring Outside The Lines
Hey, Zekcede here with a review! I love this so much! I love the way it describes childhood innocence in a way that isn't extremely bland and boring. The narrator ...
Apr 6, 2021 -
Re: go home
Hey! Zekcede here! I’m here to review this absolutely stunning song by you, soundofmind! so first of all, my thoughts whilst listening: at the beginning, I thought you sounded a ...
Apr 6, 2021 -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 13.1]
Hey! Zekcede here, The first thing I want to say is that this is absolutely beautiful, and it left me speechless. The first time I read through it I had ...
Apr 6, 2021 -
Re: How Can I? (NaPo Poem #1)
Hey! Zekcede here, The first thing I want to say is that this is absolutely beautiful, and it left me speechless. The first time I read through it I had ...
Apr 6, 2021 -
Re: named for the heavens
Hey, Zekcede here. I love this so much! I read it without prior context, but I'm going to go read the work you wrote just to get some background later. ...
Apr 2, 2021 -
Re: The Dead Land
This is amazing!! Hey, Zekcede here. I love this so much!! I love how you separate the different parts, and my favourite line is: "The traveler speaks of a valley ...
Apr 2, 2021 -
Re: The Sub-Creator
Hey, Zekcede here! This is so interesting! I was wondering, is this supposed to have been over a phone/communication device, or is it in person? I also wanted to ask ...
Apr 1, 2021 -
Re: The Augury of RiverClan - 3.2
Hey! Zekcede here! This was really intriguing and I'm looking forward to reading more! There were very few things I wanted to point out that haven't already been pointed out ...
Apr 1, 2021 -
Re: The Best Poem
Hello, my name is Zekcede, and I am crying. This poem was truly beautiful, nothing I have written, and nothing I will write in the future could live up to ...
Apr 1, 2021
