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I wish I could critique or edit to make this better, but I can't really say anything bad. Only good things. I liked the trip you took us on through ...

First off, let me welcome you to YWS with a picture of a piece of toast; Now, onto your piece. I really enjoyed it, there's just two very little things ...

I like this piece, and the whole hot vs. cold thing you've got going along. If one thing bugs me, it's the semicolon uses. I love the semicolon, but it's ...

I can't say my french is too good, but it's good enough to read this piece, and I've gotta say that I enjoy it. I like to see the use ...

As soon the sun was setting high That should be, "As soon as the sun was setting high" Apart from that little error, I can't see much of any other ...

Ooh! Haikus! Or is it really "haiki" as you said? Meh, I haven't a clue. I really like the first one, using the time for a line. It's not something ...

First of all, welcome to YWS, so I'll welcome you as I welcome all new comers; with a picture of a piece of toast. Now, for my two cents on ...

I listened to that song, and a big thank you for putting it on here. I don't enjoy when people don't tell me what the song is. Sometimes hearing the ...

I think everything that can be said to critique this piece has been said, and I've gotta agree with just about everything. Aside from those, I'm on the agreement that ...

Not much to complain about, I really enjoy this piece. I can't put my finger on why, but it just feels...right. The moment I figure it out, I'll edit this ...

HELL YES to peeps. Sorry for the all caps, but I it's the only way I can express my insane love of those candies. Have you ever tried putting them ...

This is a great piece, I have to say. Music can be pretty powerful to a lot of people (myself included), and you captured that perfectly. As for something that ...

Yeah, I gotta go with Winie on this one. The longer lines are a little more difficult to read, and makes it feel somewhat clumped. If I had to pick ...

Two things in this piece I want to change. First: afriad Even those little mistakes like spelling errors take away from the piece. Double check every time. Second: Is better ...

I couldn't really see much of any big flaws around this piece, and the little things were poked at by Khe. I definetely see the point, and it's very clear ...