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Thank you for the review, I missed those mistakes when reading it over, I'll go through it again and fix that.

Thank you so much!

Thank you!

Great job, I loved reading this. You moved the story along quite nicely. Your character doesn't feel one dimensional, and your story is interesting, I only have a few things ...

Great job, I loved reading this. You moved the story along quite nicely. Your character doesn't feel one dimensional, and your story is interesting, I only have a few things ...

The irony of this poem is that you've just written a really good poem! It really like it. good work. I don't really have any complaints, maybe it could be ...

Its good. The wording was intresing, and it was humorous, however It could do with some added length. If it had that, it would make a excellent children's book. There ...

This was a very interesting short story. The wording was good, and if you ever decided to make this a novel (Which I understand if you don't.) Then there is ...

This was a very interesting short story. The wording was good, and if you ever decided to make this a novel (Which I understand if you don't.) Then there is ...

Thank you for the review!

Thanks for the reveiw! After reading it again myself, I totally agree with everything you said. I actually have no plans for the witch, but I might consider it!

I'm sorry for everything that's happening to you right now, and I hope you can feel better about this soon. But talk to them about this, their your parents, everything ...

This is amazing! And so beautiful! I have zero criticism. You don't need to change a single thing.

Thank you so much for the review! I will take what you said into account.

Thanks!