Its good. The wording was intresing, and it was humorous, however It could do with some added length. If it had that, it would make a excellent children's book. There was a lot of misspelled words and missing punctuation.
Despite all this, it made me smile, you really did do a great job. I hope to see more writing like this. And as always, keep writing!
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