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Hi! I hope you're having a great day or night! Right off the bat, you've done an excellent job characterizing Nightshade as an impulsive, apathetic individual. I liked seeing her ...

Hello! I hope you are having a great day or night! It's really neat what you've done here! I always loved Choose Your Own Adventure Novels when I was younger, ...

Hi! Belated welcome to the Young Writers Society, I hope you find it well here! This was an excellent bit of flash fiction! Right away, you set heavy stakes, and ...

Hello! I hope you're having a great day or night! Right off the bat, there is a lot to like about this chapter! I think my favorite element was your ...

Hello! And Happy Review Day! I hope you're having a great one! I loved how you described the setting in this chapter! I felt a tad claustrophobic while reading this, ...

Hello! Happy Review Day! I hope you're having a great one! First things first, what a cliffhanger! I love how with every chapter, you continue to keep your readers on ...

Hello, and Happy Review Day! I'm not exactly surprised at how horribly their first interaction went, but I must admit, I am disappointed in Jacks conduct here. If he's going ...

Hello! Happy Review Day! I hope you're having a great day or night! Goodness, I think this might be my favorite thing that you've written! I'm starting with question two ...

Hello! Popping back in for another Review! Once again, you've written a very compelling introduction, with a ton of great action! Though some of it felt a tad repetitive, mirroring ...

Hello! I hope you are having a great day or night, and Happy Review Day! Immediately, your introduction caught my attention. I liked how it granted us insight into Elsa's ...

Hello, and Happy Review Day! Something about this short was very whimsical. I loved the description of the garden, and how Hayley wished it reached out all across the lawn. ...

Hello, and belated welcome to the site! I hope you're having a great day or night! This chapter was certainly explosive, and I loved it! The drama between the two ...

Hello again! I hope you're having a great day or night! As with the last chapter, I particularly enjoyed your subtle characterization. I liked getting insight into Jacks day-to-day life, ...

Hey! Sorry for getting to this a little later. I hope you're having a great day or night! This was a good chapter to slow down and get to know ...

Hello, and welcome to the site! I hope you’re having a great day or night! This was a fascinating read, covered head-to-toe in fun figurative language and stunning word choice. ...