Horisun

This is a very interesting poem, I really liked it! You had great word choice, and it was great! However, you sometimes you separated the lines in places it shouldn't ...

This was very dark, and had a very interesting plot, however, there are a few things I'd like to point out. First, it would be great if you separated the ...

This is a great poem, and I loved it. It was great, it is definitely one of the better poems I've seen, however, I felt like the phrase, "but a ...

This was really good, and I really enjoyed it. I like the characters. I actually didn't see much to point out. (You're making my job hard here! (: ) I ...

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This was really good, and I really enjoyed it. I like the characters. I actually didn't see much to point out. (You're making my job hard here! (: ) I ...

This is a great poem, and I loved it! The words are well chosen, and it has a interesting theme. Though, there are two things that could be done to ...

This was very good, I loved it! You kept me hooked, you're telling a good story, and you're making my job hard here! (: I didn't see much of a ...

That took a VERY dark turn... very dark turn. But now you left me wondering, if Jeff WAS telling the truth, then how did she not know about the murders? ...

This poem was really good and relatable, however I wish there was more, it was very short. If it was a little longer, it would be great! Second, this is ...

I loved this, it was really great! I feel like you're setting up for some great conflict! I love how you make it feel like a diary! There was only ...

This was beautiful, and the ending was a surprise, for certain. It actually made me shed a tear. I haven't read the first chapter, but I'll go do that now. ...

This was very enjoyable. I'm not a big batman fan myself, but I still loved this poem. I didn't see much that could be worked on, except for maybe the ...

This was a really good story. I didn't get to finish it, but from what I read, this is going somewhere great. However, this might not be too much of ...

This is very well written, I loved how you slipped the description of the surroundings without making it sound awkward. That's something I constantly struggle with. It was beautiful and ...

This is a interesting way of telling Cinderella’s story, and I love it! It’s such a creative idea, and the wording was great, however, Some of this seemed to jump, ...