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  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: I am invisible

    Good afternoon! I really enjoyed reading this poem of yours! Straight off the bat, your imagery is absolutely fantastic. The opening stanza sets the scene perfectly, not only describing the ...

    Dec 30, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: King of the Court v2 [CH1]

    As someone who has never played basketball before, and barely understands it on even a surface level, lemme say I was shocked by how invested I got into this. The ...

    Dec 6, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Card Academy: Queen of Swords: Chapter 2

    Hey! I saw this chapter hanging out here in the Green Room, and decided to check it and the previous one out! Overall, I really enjoyed both! They're super lighthearted, ...

    Dec 6, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: 1 - Kate

    Good afternoon! I hope you're having a good day today! I really enjoyed this chapter; right at the start, you immediately hooked the reader. Throughout the entire chapter, I was ...

    Dec 6, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Fourth Proxy: Prologue

    Hello, and good evening! I hope you have had a nice day so far! This was a really great start to whatever story you plan to tell. You've introduced multiple ...

    Nov 26, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: What is Love?

    Hello, I hope this Review finds you well! This is a really clever poem! I really enjoyed your use of figurative language, as well as some of your rhymes throughout ...

    Sep 7, 2021
  • Lyrics » Humor, Lyrical Re: Heart ache

    Hello, and Happy Review Month! Right off the bat, I have to mention how much I adored some of your metaphors. Specifically the "Lord, help purify me like you with ...

    Sep 3, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 1 Part 1)

    Greetings and Salutations, and Happy Review Month! This is a great opening chapter. You did an excellent job introducing both the characters and the setting. I really enjoyed learning about ...

    Sep 3, 2021
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Song of Stars

    Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night, depending on whenever you are reading this! First things, the figurative language used in this piece was fantastic! The ...

    Jun 7, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: [Misreadings]

    Good Evening, or whatever time you happen to be reading this! This is my first review in awhile, so forgive me if I'm a little rusty. I love this poems ...

    Jun 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Forest of the Lost

    I had to read this poem multiple times, because the imagery is just too gorgeous! The rhyme scheme was on point, and your word choice was beautiful! I loved almost ...

    Apr 26, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 2 - The Meeting

    Hey! It’s me again! Here to review your work as promised! This chapter contained a lot to unpack. We are now introduced to our cast of characters, all of whom ...

    Apr 23, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1 - The Prophecy

    Greetings and salutations! This immediately caught my eye, as I am a huge fan of Greek Mythology! Though I am not the most knowledgeable on the subject, the old legends ...

    Apr 22, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I tipped my cup of coffee

    This poem is astoundingly clever! I especially love the line where it counts to four, as I can practically hear the eerie chimes of a Grandfather clock, followed by the ...

    Apr 22, 2021
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: INTP, Logician

    Hello, hello, hello! Guess who's procrastinating on work again? Not me, totally. As you can most likely guess, I'm going to review your poem, almost like I'm "(Picking apart) every ...

    Dec 9, 2020


The inner machinations of my mind are an enigma.
— Patrick Star