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Re: I am invisible
Good afternoon! I really enjoyed reading this poem of yours! Straight off the bat, your imagery is absolutely fantastic. The opening stanza sets the scene perfectly, not only describing the ...
Dec 30, 2021 -
Re: King of the Court v2 [CH1]
As someone who has never played basketball before, and barely understands it on even a surface level, lemme say I was shocked by how invested I got into this. The ...
Dec 6, 2021 -
Re: Card Academy: Queen of Swords: Chapter 2
Hey! I saw this chapter hanging out here in the Green Room, and decided to check it and the previous one out! Overall, I really enjoyed both! They're super lighthearted, ...
Dec 6, 2021 -
Re: 1 - Kate
Good afternoon! I hope you're having a good day today! I really enjoyed this chapter; right at the start, you immediately hooked the reader. Throughout the entire chapter, I was ...
Dec 6, 2021 -
Re: The Fourth Proxy: Prologue
Hello, and good evening! I hope you have had a nice day so far! This was a really great start to whatever story you plan to tell. You've introduced multiple ...
Nov 26, 2021 -
Re: What is Love?
Hello, I hope this Review finds you well! This is a really clever poem! I really enjoyed your use of figurative language, as well as some of your rhymes throughout ...
Sep 7, 2021 -
Re: Heart ache
Hello, and Happy Review Month! Right off the bat, I have to mention how much I adored some of your metaphors. Specifically the "Lord, help purify me like you with ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: Fool Without A Master (Chapter 1 Part 1)
Greetings and Salutations, and Happy Review Month! This is a great opening chapter. You did an excellent job introducing both the characters and the setting. I really enjoyed learning about ...
Sep 3, 2021 -
Re: Song of Stars
Hello! I hope you are having a good day or night, depending on whenever you are reading this! First things, the figurative language used in this piece was fantastic! The ...
Jun 7, 2021 -
Re: [Misreadings]
Good Evening, or whatever time you happen to be reading this! This is my first review in awhile, so forgive me if I'm a little rusty. I love this poems ...
Jun 7, 2021 -
Re: Forest of the Lost
I had to read this poem multiple times, because the imagery is just too gorgeous! The rhyme scheme was on point, and your word choice was beautiful! I loved almost ...
Apr 26, 2021 -
Re: Chapter 2 - The Meeting
Hey! It’s me again! Here to review your work as promised! This chapter contained a lot to unpack. We are now introduced to our cast of characters, all of whom ...
Apr 23, 2021 -
Re: Chapter 1 - The Prophecy
Greetings and salutations! This immediately caught my eye, as I am a huge fan of Greek Mythology! Though I am not the most knowledgeable on the subject, the old legends ...
Apr 22, 2021 -
Re: I tipped my cup of coffee
This poem is astoundingly clever! I especially love the line where it counts to four, as I can practically hear the eerie chimes of a Grandfather clock, followed by the ...
Apr 22, 2021 -
Re: INTP, Logician
Hello, hello, hello! Guess who's procrastinating on work again? Not me, totally. As you can most likely guess, I'm going to review your poem, almost like I'm "(Picking apart) every ...
Dec 9, 2020
