Horisun

Hi again! Diving straight back into it: This chapter felt a lot calmer compared to 1 and 2. There are still those moments of fear, Caroline is still itching to ...

Howdy, lovelydove! Back for another review! These two chapters have left me deeply unnerved in the best possible way. You do a stellar job of transporting us directly into the ...

Hey there, Rebel! First off, all caps, FANTASTIC rhyme scheme! LOVE "yet" and "silhouette," and LOVE the internal rhymes, too. It's such a satisfying reading experience and flows together so ...

Howdy, lovelydove! This is a striking poem, with stunning, visceral imagery and impactful word choice. "Devoured," "ravenous," "grab," "bite," "howl," stood out to me in particular. They paint these s

This is a really fascinating bit of absurdism! It reminds me a little of those "two sentence horror stories" you see online, but executed far more thoughtfully. The lack of ...

Hi there, and belated welcome to the Young Writer's Society! I found this prologue to be an incredibly endearing introduction to these characters. The conclusion of this prologue, that is, ...

Howdy, canopy! I'm always a fan of fairy tale retellings, especially those leaning more comedic. This piece in particular was hysterical; when I wasn't grinning ear-to-ear, I was laughing out ...

Hello, and welcome to the Young Writer's Society! I like to think of myself as the number one fan of classic Swords and Sorcery fantasy, so right away this story ...

Hello! I hope you're having a good day so far! You've got a real knack for lending some magic to slice of life narratives. This is true for all that ...

Hello! I hope you're doing well! As someone who believes all people should cry more often, because it is one of the best sources of catharsis, you did an amazing ...

Howdy, AlwaySea! I hope you're having a good day or night! I was fascinated by this poem's premise. I think every human, at one point or another, has wondered if ...

Hello, Snoink! I was super excited to get the notification for a new chapter! Been really looking forward to see the direction this story will be going, (and also to ...

I'm always partial to some good Historical fiction and chess metaphors, and so right away, you had me hooked. I took a look back at the prior chapters, and you've ...

I tend to refrain from caps-lock in reviews, but I've been left no choice... THIS WAS AWESOME!!! That ending was an absolute banger, and I love how the swans seem ...

Howdy, Snoink! I remember reading an earlier draft of this chapter, and I'm super excited to get a peek into its overhaul! As before, Alainna and Solea are a compelling ...