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Re: The Castle 1.2
I’m back for more! I hope you are having a good day or night as you read this! :) So I didn’t find much to nitpick today which is awesome! ...
Dec 30, 2020 -
Re: The Castle 1.1
Hello Elinor! I’m here for just a quick review but I hope what I have to say will help you in future chapters! Also, I’ve never reviewed your work before ...
Dec 29, 2020 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 34
Hey Cecy. Here for another review! So I’m not really sure how to word this but I’ll do my best to try. For the most part, I enjoyed this chapter ...
May 10, 2020 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 33
Hey Cecy! Here for a badly delayed review! ;) I have only one thing that I wanted to point out. All throughout this chapter, I wasn’t feeling Kkicachi (no idea ...
May 9, 2020 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 32
Hey Cecy! Here for a quick review! ;) So, to start off, the only thing to watch for are just a few spelling errors that can be caught with a ...
Apr 30, 2020 -
Re: VALOR - Chapter 3 - You Call This A Gym?
Hey again! I’m back for a quick review! I didn’t catch too many thing with this one either. The only thing is that from the previous chapters, this one seemed ...
Apr 28, 2020 -
Re: VALOR - Chapter 2 - First Class and First Impressions
Hey! I’m here as promised! A bit later then I would have hoped but better late then never! ;) So, I don’t have too many things to point out. The ...
Apr 27, 2020 -
Re: VALOR - Chapter 1 - Highmark Academy
Hello Shallow! Just popping in for a quick review! :D So, my main concerns are: 1) Some of your sentences are very long. The first one for example, is a ...
Apr 24, 2020 -
Re: VALOR - Prologue - Hear How They Whistle
Hello Shallow! I’m here for a quick review! :D As I see that you are new here, I know I haven’t reviewed anything of yours! ;) I just want to ...
Apr 21, 2020 -
Re: The Mutation Chapter 1 The Before.
Hello Cyber! Here for a quick review! So this is a very good piece with an interesting feel to it. My only concern, however, is that most of your sentences ...
Apr 17, 2020 -
Re: Seven Minutes: Chapter One
Hello Jane! (Hope you don’t mind the short version of your username!) I’m here to give you a quick review and wish you a good day as well as a ...
Apr 15, 2020 -
Re: Fervor Chapter One- Viola Romano
Hello! I'm here to leave a quick review! No offence is meant by anything I say. Just trying to help!! :D Review time! Drool coated his chin, trailed to his ...
Apr 4, 2020 -
Re: Reminisces of Jack Frost the Third (Prologue)
Hello Gravitem! I'm here for a quick review! I don't think I've reviewed your work before so just want to shout out that I don't mean any offence by anything ...
Apr 4, 2020 -
Re: Town of Terrors, Chapter 1-3
Hello Locke! I am here for a quick review! I don't think I have reviewed any of your work before so I really just want to let you know that ...
Apr 4, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1
Hello Drac! Hope you are doing well today! I am here to leave you a quick review! :D I don’t think I have ever reviewed anything of yours before so ...
Apr 2, 2020