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Honora

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: The Castle 1.2

    I’m back for more! I hope you are having a good day or night as you read this! :) So I didn’t find much to nitpick today which is awesome! ...

    Dec 30, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: The Castle 1.1

    Hello Elinor! I’m here for just a quick review but I hope what I have to say will help you in future chapters! Also, I’ve never reviewed your work before ...

    Dec 29, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 34

    Hey Cecy. Here for another review! So I’m not really sure how to word this but I’ll do my best to try. For the most part, I enjoyed this chapter ...

    May 10, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 33

    Hey Cecy! Here for a badly delayed review! ;) I have only one thing that I wanted to point out. All throughout this chapter, I wasn’t feeling Kkicachi (no idea ...

    May 9, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 32

    Hey Cecy! Here for a quick review! ;) So, to start off, the only thing to watch for are just a few spelling errors that can be caught with a ...

    Apr 30, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: VALOR - Chapter 3 - You Call This A Gym?

    Hey again! I’m back for a quick review! I didn’t catch too many thing with this one either. The only thing is that from the previous chapters, this one seemed ...

    Apr 28, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: VALOR - Chapter 2 - First Class and First Impressions

    Hey! I’m here as promised! A bit later then I would have hoped but better late then never! ;) So, I don’t have too many things to point out. The ...

    Apr 27, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: VALOR - Chapter 1 - Highmark Academy

    Hello Shallow! Just popping in for a quick review! :D So, my main concerns are: 1) Some of your sentences are very long. The first one for example, is a ...

    Apr 24, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: VALOR - Prologue - Hear How They Whistle

    Hello Shallow! I’m here for a quick review! :D As I see that you are new here, I know I haven’t reviewed anything of yours! ;) I just want to ...

    Apr 21, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: The Mutation Chapter 1 The Before.

    Hello Cyber! Here for a quick review! So this is a very good piece with an interesting feel to it. My only concern, however, is that most of your sentences ...

    Apr 17, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: Seven Minutes: Chapter One

    Hello Jane! (Hope you don’t mind the short version of your username!) I’m here to give you a quick review and wish you a good day as well as a ...

    Apr 15, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Fervor Chapter One- Viola Romano

    Hello! I'm here to leave a quick review! No offence is meant by anything I say. Just trying to help!! :D Review time! Drool coated his chin, trailed to his ...

    Apr 4, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Reminisces of Jack Frost the Third (Prologue)

    Hello Gravitem! I'm here for a quick review! I don't think I've reviewed your work before so just want to shout out that I don't mean any offence by anything ...

    Apr 4, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Realistic Re: Town of Terrors, Chapter 1-3

    Hello Locke! I am here for a quick review! I don't think I have reviewed any of your work before so I really just want to let you know that ...

    Apr 4, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1

    Hello Drac! Hope you are doing well today! I am here to leave you a quick review! :D I don’t think I have ever reviewed anything of yours before so ...

    Apr 2, 2020


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