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Re: Luminous: The Forge (Chap 2.2)
I'm back again Aly! :) I found this one was a lot easier to read then the last one. The words flowed better and the sentences weren't so long. It ...
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: Like A Rose
Hey EagleFly! :) I don't read poetry often but this one caught my eyes and I really liked it. That's saying something because usually I don't even like poetry. Not ...
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 1 Wis-per
Well, I commented on this already at the club but I'll review it here! ;) From what I can tell, your main issue isn't that big of a problem. You ...
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: Luminous: The Forge (Chap 2.1)
Hey there Aly! :) I've seen this in the greenroom for a while now but I just haven't had the time to catch up on the previous one. Sorry for ...
Apr 3, 2019 -
Re: Bonetaker Chapter 1 and 2
Hi!!! I am going to start by saying MAKE THIS A NOVEL! It is so dark and sinister but it literally just sucked me in. Good job! :) So I ...
Apr 2, 2019 -
Re: monster
Hi there! :D This piece is very good. I don't know why but it really spoke to me. Maybe it's appealing to my darker side ;) So the only line ...
Apr 2, 2019 -
Re: ORWEO (Working Title) 3.1
Hey Tuck! It's been a while and I apologize for taking so long to review this. I promise it's only because I've been busy at home and not because I ...
Apr 1, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 2: Heist
Hey Mira!! Sorry it took me so long to review. It's been a bit crazy at my place for the last while. Anyway, I'll start by saying that this is ...
Apr 1, 2019 -
Re: Impromptu #1
Hey there! So I don't know much about poetry but here I am! I want to start by saying that this piece doesn't flow very well. I find the formatting ...
Mar 28, 2019 -
Re: Dark, Dark the Night
Hi blackblade! This poem is cool because it is mysterious and, well, dark. It gave me chills as I read it but almost in a good way. It is pretty ...
Mar 20, 2019 -
Re: Don't be afraid
Hey Fire! Once again you have blown me away with your writing. So far, from what I can tell, your work is very personal and relatable. Which is AWESOME! Good ...
Mar 20, 2019 -
Re: Poem #9
Hey Cat! I suck at poetry so I won't correct anything but I will tell you what I thought of this. :) It's relatable and to me, that is a ...
Mar 20, 2019 -
Re: The Ugly Truth About Slippers
Hey hope! This was cute and extremely relatable. The basement is always the scary place and we do tend to get over tensed lol ;) I didn't find anything wrong ...
Mar 20, 2019 -
Re: Phantom
Hey there! I figured since you are always reviewing my stuff I better check yours out! :D Wow...I can't say that I'm disappointed. It's really creepy but extremely intriguing and ...
Mar 20, 2019 -
Re: Untitled 2
Hey Jade! Once again, your writing is intriguing and really draws me in. It is different and I am looking forward to getting to know Dane. For some reason (in ...
Mar 19, 2019
