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Re: Autumn Chapter 5
Hello! I believe I read one of your other chapters before this, because I distinctively remember the whole light pack and dark pack and the dark pack's stance on killing ...
Mar 23, 2018 -
Re: A devil in the mirror
Hello! This was an interesting example of childhood emotions surrounding romantic love and yucky situations like what happened to Stella. I remember as a kid having similar feelings about these ...
Mar 20, 2018 -
Re: Mental Illness in the Impluse Society
Hello! Interesting topic! Honestly I think it's a strong essay! I'm not an essay expert at all, but from what I understand about them through past experiences with highschool myself, ...
Mar 8, 2018 -
Re: Wouldn't That Be Lovely
Hello! This was interesting in that while reading this I actually thought it was a happy poem- that the narrator wanted to store good memories in a tin box, like ...
Mar 7, 2018 -
Re: Psychic chapter two
Hey there! What a lovely day for a review, eh? At first, reading this, I was like WAIT a minute, I thought this was supposed to be a HORROR novel?! ...
Mar 5, 2018 -
Re: Autumn Ch. 3
Hello! Yay, a wolf story! Normally, I'm actually not a huge fan of wolf stories/werewolf stories, etc, BUT this seems like a fun kind of novel with a lot of ...
Mar 4, 2018 -
Re: General Behind Me #4 Till my death
Hello! I was excited at the thought of a potential dual! But that didn't happen sadly. :/ In any case, there was lots of mention of swords and I like ...
Mar 4, 2018 -
Re: we woke up the long way [edited]
Heyo! This has a lovely flow to it, and the shape is lovely too- if I remember correctly, that's something you often do- have interestingly shaped poems? It seems to ...
Mar 4, 2018 -
Re: Yet Another Day
Hello there! It's certainly always nice to see short stories being posted. I feel like they're underrated and for some reason not as common these days. Though maybe I'm wrong. ...
Mar 1, 2018 -
Re: The New Hero: Chapter Two
Hello there! Great to see a new novel on it's way! And this seems like an intriguing one, with talk of magical things and the likes! But there's not a ...
Feb 28, 2018 -
Re: Saudade (prolog)
Hello! The beginning was really strong, I thought; there was a lot of mystery and wonder of what was going on and why she didn't want him to kiss her ...
Feb 11, 2018 -
Re: Dear You
Hello there! This was a very intriguing piece. What drew me in originally is the title- I used to address my journal entries "Dear you", in the thought that I ...
Jan 29, 2018 -
Re: His Eyes, a Danatole fanfiction
I'm not familiar with Danatole either, but this work has been in the Green Room since December (LAST YEAR), so let's see what we can do! First of all, I ...
Jan 24, 2018 -
Re: Prologue
Hello there! I was really excited to find a prologue in the Green Room, if I'm honest! I miss prologues. And I feel like you did a pretty good job ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: Hug Me 2.0
Hey there! Care for a review? Mostly I think I'll just share my thoughts and impressions upon reading this poem, so you can see if you got across what you ...
Dec 31, 2017
