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Re: The Goddess Nonbeliever
Hello there! Care for a review? This is a really cool concept, and I really like the sort of... dramatic... theme? Like, it's almost in a rather mundane sort of ...
Jan 3, 2019 -
Re: Story of You: (A Ballad)
Hello! Care for a review? This was really light and fluffy and cheery and... what's the word I'm looking for? WISTFUL! And I thought it was really sweet. But then ...
Jan 3, 2019 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 15
Hello! I figured I'd help this out of the Green Room. I haven't read the previous chapters, so I'm just going to go by what I see here, if that's ...
Jan 3, 2019 -
Re: Daydream
Hello! I'm writing this on my phone so I apologize for any typos I may miss or anything! This is a really interesting way of... telling a story! I don't ...
Jan 1, 2019 -
Re: Shreds Of Evidence...
Hey there! I thought I'd get this work of yours out of the green room for ya. c: This is an interesting concept! From what I understand, on the Queen's ...
Dec 24, 2018 -
Re: Writing Prompt #1
Hey there! ZOMBIES! I have a real sorta soft spot for zombies, even though I'm really not into gore lately! They're just so creepy- and there's always that opportunity to ...
Dec 19, 2018 -
Re: 3 AM
Hey there! Care for a review? This was a cool idea! There was a ton going on in this story, and it definitely kept us on our toes and kept ...
Nov 25, 2018 -
Re: The Roof Top- first draft! please review so i know what to improve
Hello! Care for a review? This work felt very relaxing and calm to me. Two sisters, chilling on a roof in the middle of the night- it was really quite ...
Nov 4, 2018 -
Re: Rest In Life Reality Requires
Hey there! Care for a review this lovely Review Day? This is a very intriguing poem. I can't say that I fully understand what you're trying to convey in it, ...
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: Verses in the Dead
Hey! Happy Review Day!!! I thought this poem had a bit of an Edgar Allen Poe vibe to it- at least, the sort of tempo and the way you worded ...
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: Forgive Me if I Forget
Hey there Snazzy! Happy Review Day! I thought you had some really interesting images in this. Especially the sun in the pill bottle one! I'm guessing that was also sort ...
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: Joker Les Amours Harley Quinn
Hey Cas! Happy Review Dayyyy! C: So I sorta liked this theme of a love story? I haven't really read any love poems that are sort of halloween themed before, ...
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: non-borscht
Hey there! Happy Review Day! So I clicked on this poem because I LOVE Borscht! My grandma used to make it every time we'd visit and yeah. Such good memories. ...
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: fault
Hey there! Happy Review Day! C: I haven't reviewed (or written) poetry in awhiiiiile, so please forgive me; I'm a little rusty. Usually my approach to reviewing poetry is letting ...
Oct 28, 2018 -
Re: Brief Conversation
Hey there! Happy Review Day! C: So I sorta like the setting of this piece- it seems they're on a bus and just having some good ol' conversation! Stories with ...
Oct 28, 2018
