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Re: This Thing of Mine - Chapter One
Hey fellow sock! :-D Sorry I took so long! There's something so intriguing about someone that can pick up an instrument for the first time, and know exactly how to ...
Feb 4, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 1
Hey Noelly! Naturally, I like this chapter already, due to all the glorious emotions going around! You have Akia and Sam at their broken home. You have this tension you ...
Feb 1, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 32 Part 2
Hey Noelle!!! I don't have a review for this part, sadly. you need to make more mistakes so I have something to do! I like how Falyn was so determined ...
Jan 29, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 32 Part 1
Hey Noelle! Oh boy, poor Akia. With the small amount of information Falyn now knows, Akia might just get the wrong story! >.< It was nice hearing from Falyn again, ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: First not quite love but maybe like: Intro
Hey there! You're really quite good at making the characters actions feel real... like, say, when Olivia was in the shower and such- you described how she shampooed her hair, ...
Jan 21, 2015 -
Re: love poem
Hey Summer! I honestly was expecting something a bit longer! I think you could probably expand on this, and help paint the picture a little better for us- it's so ...
Jan 18, 2015 -
Re: Truth or Dare? Part 1
Hey Toomanythoughts! Care for a review? I thought the whole part where Olive throws the pebbles rather funny, because that's normally a cliché thing that stories feature guys doing! It ...
Jan 15, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 31 Part 3
Hi Noelle!!! I mostly really just simply enjoyed this part. :-P There's only one small thing that I want to point out, and that's a very small thing... you can ...
Jan 8, 2015 -
Re: This Thing of Mine - Prologue
Hello sock friend! :D As it turns out, I lied, and came early. :/ I really like that Harmony is ( was* ) homeless! I know that sounds terrible, but ...
Jan 2, 2015 -
Re: Death's Warrior Chapter 3 (Part 1)
Hey there fellow Night Fury! Let's get to it! :D I haven't read chapter one or two, but hopefully you won't mind me reviewing this first ( I may just ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: ...
Hey! :D This was lovely and all... it was very hard not to be all "Awww, that SO sweet!"... But then... Erm, he locked in closet! It seems this poor ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 31 Part 2
Hey!!! :D Those guys just can't seem to keep their hands off each other! You sure are making me dislike a lot of characters; Rhys, Zeke, now Phillip gets on ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: If the shoe fits
Hey! Happy Review Day!!! :D So this was certainly interesting, but there's a few things I'd like to point out, if that's alright with you. First off, I don't really ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Yarn of the Cowboy
Hey Wolfie! Happy Review Day!!! :D This was a lot better then I expected! I really actually enjoyed this a lot! For the first half I was kind of lost, ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 31 Part 1
Hi Noelle! :D You've got a good part of a chapter here. Let's take a look, shall we? Akia wasn't important enough for seers to have visions about her. Or ...
Dec 28, 2014
