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  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: This Thing of Mine - Chapter One

    Hey fellow sock! :-D Sorry I took so long! There's something so intriguing about someone that can pick up an instrument for the first time, and know exactly how to ...

    Feb 4, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 1

    Hey Noelly! Naturally, I like this chapter already, due to all the glorious emotions going around! You have Akia and Sam at their broken home. You have this tension you ...

    Feb 1, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 32 Part 2

    Hey Noelle!!! I don't have a review for this part, sadly. you need to make more mistakes so I have something to do! I like how Falyn was so determined ...

    Jan 29, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 32 Part 1

    Hey Noelle! Oh boy, poor Akia. With the small amount of information Falyn now knows, Akia might just get the wrong story! >.< It was nice hearing from Falyn again, ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: First not quite love but maybe like: Intro

    Hey there! You're really quite good at making the characters actions feel real... like, say, when Olivia was in the shower and such- you described how she shampooed her hair, ...

    Jan 21, 2015
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: love poem

    Hey Summer! I honestly was expecting something a bit longer! I think you could probably expand on this, and help paint the picture a little better for us- it's so ...

    Jan 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Truth or Dare? Part 1

    Hey Toomanythoughts! Care for a review? I thought the whole part where Olive throws the pebbles rather funny, because that's normally a cliché thing that stories feature guys doing! It ...

    Jan 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 31 Part 3

    Hi Noelle!!! I mostly really just simply enjoyed this part. :-P There's only one small thing that I want to point out, and that's a very small thing... you can ...

    Jan 8, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: This Thing of Mine - Prologue

    Hello sock friend! :D As it turns out, I lied, and came early. :/ I really like that Harmony is ( was* ) homeless! I know that sounds terrible, but ...

    Jan 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Death's Warrior Chapter 3 (Part 1)

    Hey there fellow Night Fury! Let's get to it! :D I haven't read chapter one or two, but hopefully you won't mind me reviewing this first ( I may just ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: ...

    Hey! :D This was lovely and all... it was very hard not to be all "Awww, that SO sweet!"... But then... Erm, he locked in closet! It seems this poor ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 31 Part 2

    Hey!!! :D Those guys just can't seem to keep their hands off each other! You sure are making me dislike a lot of characters; Rhys, Zeke, now Phillip gets on ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If the shoe fits

    Hey! Happy Review Day!!! :D So this was certainly interesting, but there's a few things I'd like to point out, if that's alright with you. First off, I don't really ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Yarn of the Cowboy

    Hey Wolfie! Happy Review Day!!! :D This was a lot better then I expected! I really actually enjoyed this a lot! For the first half I was kind of lost, ...

    Dec 28, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 31 Part 1

    Hi Noelle! :D You've got a good part of a chapter here. Let's take a look, shall we? Akia wasn't important enough for seers to have visions about her. Or ...

    Dec 28, 2014


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