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  • Other » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Lone Builder

    Hello there! ( The avvie made me think you were Timmy at first! XD ) This is a lovely piece; you seem to have said everything you intended to say ...

    Apr 16, 2015
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Dystopian Prince - Chapter 1

    Hey JK! ;P There seems to be an awful lot of politics in this here chapter. And I'm guessing that we just witnessed 'father' getting a promotion; am I right? ...

    Mar 26, 2015
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: A Bus Story

    Hello OlgaB! Care for a review? This was rather amusing, and I thought it was quite a cute story! But there's just a few things I thought I'd mention for ...

    Mar 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, Realistic Re: Not too Different

    Hello Chrissy! I really like this. In fact, I think this would make a great spoken word poem. I especially like that it was done from the POV of children- ...

    Mar 16, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Vardøger

    Hello there! Care for a review? :-P Lovely ending! The thing I thought you did really well, was tricking us into believing that everything was okay. That's always an interesting ...

    Mar 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 34 Part 1

    Hey Noelle! Alas, I have returned ( I'm getting really tired of the number 133, thus, I realized I should be reviewing! ). They're DOOMED! What a lovely chapter. :3 ...

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: The sun is awfully dark tonight.

    Hey Strange! I actually found this rather entertaining. I mean, there's something really hilarious about the dull narration that goes on in this poem. I have a few things that ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Secret of the One- Chapter 5.2

    Hey Cricket! Care for a review this fine review day? :-P I didn't read previous chapters, so I might get some things wrong. Even though I just jumped in here, ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 4

    Hey Noelle! :3 This is so exciting! It feels like we're so close now!! I actually found this part quite emotional. When the earthquake started, and Sam got separated from ...

    Feb 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 3

    Hello Noelle!! :-P I kind of like Dorrin. I love that the whole situation just bores him. Of course, that's probably bad for Sam and Akia because they certainly don't ...

    Feb 16, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Romantic, Realistic Re: What to look for in a woman? Does the Ring fit flawlessly?

    Hey there! I'm not a guy, so this is... interesting? I like the idea of guys giving each other advice on women- cause it's not something you hear of a ...

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Other » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Film

    Hey there! Care for a review? First off, I appreciate what it is you're trying to do with this piece. I love it when people remember people... and are moved ...

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 2

    Hey Noelle! :3 At first I was worried that we were getting a bit sidetracked by going off to get what Akia 'needed', but once I found out what it ...

    Feb 15, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: This is a Love Story - Part 1

    Hey! Sorry it took me a bit to get here! I found this quite entertaining. It's an interesting and terrifying concept that you'd get paired with someone rather sexist in ...

    Feb 9, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Liberation [Prologue]

    Hey Esca! :3 Interesting to get us hooked using a torture scene! I am actually, well, you're quite good at making me cringe for your characters. The poor things! Oh ...

    Feb 9, 2015


The very worst use of time is to do very well what need not be done at all.
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