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Re: Lone Builder
Hello there! ( The avvie made me think you were Timmy at first! XD ) This is a lovely piece; you seem to have said everything you intended to say ...
Apr 16, 2015 -
Re: Dystopian Prince - Chapter 1
Hey JK! ;P There seems to be an awful lot of politics in this here chapter. And I'm guessing that we just witnessed 'father' getting a promotion; am I right? ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: A Bus Story
Hello OlgaB! Care for a review? This was rather amusing, and I thought it was quite a cute story! But there's just a few things I thought I'd mention for ...
Mar 24, 2015 -
Re: Not too Different
Hello Chrissy! I really like this. In fact, I think this would make a great spoken word poem. I especially like that it was done from the POV of children- ...
Mar 16, 2015 -
Re: Vardøger
Hello there! Care for a review? :-P Lovely ending! The thing I thought you did really well, was tricking us into believing that everything was okay. That's always an interesting ...
Mar 13, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 34 Part 1
Hey Noelle! Alas, I have returned ( I'm getting really tired of the number 133, thus, I realized I should be reviewing! ). They're DOOMED! What a lovely chapter. :3 ...
Mar 11, 2015 -
Re: The sun is awfully dark tonight.
Hey Strange! I actually found this rather entertaining. I mean, there's something really hilarious about the dull narration that goes on in this poem. I have a few things that ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Secret of the One- Chapter 5.2
Hey Cricket! Care for a review this fine review day? :-P I didn't read previous chapters, so I might get some things wrong. Even though I just jumped in here, ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 4
Hey Noelle! :3 This is so exciting! It feels like we're so close now!! I actually found this part quite emotional. When the earthquake started, and Sam got separated from ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 3
Hello Noelle!! :-P I kind of like Dorrin. I love that the whole situation just bores him. Of course, that's probably bad for Sam and Akia because they certainly don't ...
Feb 16, 2015 -
Re: What to look for in a woman? Does the Ring fit flawlessly?
Hey there! I'm not a guy, so this is... interesting? I like the idea of guys giving each other advice on women- cause it's not something you hear of a ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: Film
Hey there! Care for a review? First off, I appreciate what it is you're trying to do with this piece. I love it when people remember people... and are moved ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 2
Hey Noelle! :3 At first I was worried that we were getting a bit sidetracked by going off to get what Akia 'needed', but once I found out what it ...
Feb 15, 2015 -
Re: This is a Love Story - Part 1
Hey! Sorry it took me a bit to get here! I found this quite entertaining. It's an interesting and terrifying concept that you'd get paired with someone rather sexist in ...
Feb 9, 2015 -
Re: Liberation [Prologue]
Hey Esca! :3 Interesting to get us hooked using a torture scene! I am actually, well, you're quite good at making me cringe for your characters. The poor things! Oh ...
Feb 9, 2015
