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Re: The Tale of Broken Sea
Hello there! I'm here with the review you requested! You have some interesting imagery in here- and I like how you have a lot of definite lines, like statements. Sometimes ...
Jan 18, 2019 -
Re: downpour
Hey there! How about a review? So this was an interesting read! Some of the images definitely made me think! And I defintely like the sort of dark-ish theme/feel of ...
Jan 17, 2019 -
Re: The rabbit and the tortoise
Hey there! I thought I'd stop by to give you a review. So first of all, I quite liked this take on the tortoise and the hare! I used to ...
Jan 16, 2019 -
Re: Telefail - Chapter 1
Hey there! Care for a review? First of all, you should always continue writing a novel! :D Especially if you're passionate about it and really want to tell that story! ...
Jan 15, 2019 -
Re: So this is it, huh?
Hey there! How about a review? Oh. Man. There are so many things that you just did INCREDIBLY well in this, and I absolutely love- although I have things quoted ...
Jan 14, 2019 -
Re: Alone On Christmas
Hey there! I thought I'd give you my thoughts on these lyrics. First of all, full disclaimer: I don't celebrate Christmas! But I decided to read and review this anyways, ...
Jan 13, 2019 -
Re: Sarah and the pink bunny Twiki: Chapter four
Hey there! Care for a review? I haven't read the previous parts, I'm just going to review this based on what I see in this chapter. c: This is a ...
Jan 11, 2019 -
Re: So-called merciless
Heyo! I thought I'd give ya a review. It's always so interesting to see different types of poetry and how people express themselves- I think you have a very different ...
Jan 11, 2019 -
Re: A little bit of love.
Hey there! Care for a review? This is a sweet story. I always love a feel-good story with a happy ending- afterall, I read to relax and, well, for the ...
Jan 10, 2019 -
Re: Chapter Two: mac Cumhaills
Hello! I thought I'd give you a review! C: So this is a really cool concept! I don't think I've ever really heard of a sort of magic system where ...
Jan 9, 2019 -
Re: Until the end.
Hey there! I thought I'd stop by to give you my thoughts on your work. I could definitely tell that these were lyrics- I came in just thinking it was ...
Jan 7, 2019 -
Re: We are Sisters till the end
Hey there! Care for a review? So WOW that got dark fast! I thought this was gonna be a nice little story about sisters and stuff- you really proved me ...
Jan 7, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 1
Hey there! Care for a review? So I thought this was a pretty interesting concept! I liked how you made us wonder at the beginning as to why she was ...
Jan 6, 2019 -
Re: A stain, in all it's splendor.
Hey there! I thought I'd stop by to give this a review. I think the cool thing about this is it's something people can relate to. The sort of fear ...
Jan 4, 2019 -
Re: Background Noise
Heyo Cas! I thought I'd drop by and give you a review. I really liked how this started out- for a love poem, it started with a really unique vibe, ...
Jan 4, 2019
