Hereticteen

would that be enough for me? no.... would it set me free? ..... (My own revision to the story because that is how I want to read it, please pay ...

Neat little short poem, I enjoyed it as much as the last one I read by you. I must say that you have a way with words, and the theme ...

I'll start by saying that I find the structure of this poem very interesting, but that's what makes freewriting beautiful. I like how it starts by mentioning "emotionless" people, I ...

I apologize, as I am in desperate need of points or whatever so that I can publish another work of my own. I understand that this is s***** for me ...

I outright like this poem. It does a very good job of displaying human emotion. And there is a lot of very good descriptive words (adjectives, probably... I don't really ...

I Like It. Here's why... My story is complicated and I'm not going to go into much detail, but I am currently (forcefully) separated from my fiance by her parents. ...

It's funny you should mention that. The "Pledge of Allegiance" Actually started as "The Oath". Once Lincoln became president he added a bunch of new stuff like "One nation, Under ...

I walked into this expecting it to be some stupid alien story. Boy, was I wrong! This poem is incredibly developed and well written. I adore the unique style that ...

This poem expresses and idea that many of us have pondered but few have ever written. Extremely good work, amazing job tackling such a tough subject. It makes me realize ...

I find this poem very interesting because I am a musician myself, and I understand all of the music-related details. I like how you said "... even my worst fears, ...

It's not too horribly written. Pretty d***ed good, actually. But it NEEDS to be proof-read. Whenever submitting a story, always make sure to proof-read. Outside of that, I really like ...

Woah... By the 2nd verse had already flipped my expectations. I really like how the poem evolves from "smashed" to "broke to pieces". And it went from depressing at first ...

This poem is amazing because, as a writer, I understand everything that you are saying. Your metaphors are top-notch. Each one makes sense. Even if some of your lines don't ...

I respect your approach to poetry. I've never seen a poem structure like this before. It sounds obsessive and repetitive but I like how you go into detail about him. ...

There is an amazing concept behind this poem! I really like how you expressed different perspectives and found a way to make that "shapeshift" work wonderfully. There is nothing about ...